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person Anon
schedule February 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This seem to be one of those extremely awesome stories that just never gets finished. But it doesn't have to be that way! Perhaps it will help if you do something really unexpected? You know, chuck all your plans for the story in the bin and make new ones. There's more than one right way to reach the ending of a story. Banish Legolas from Lothlorien, kill Galadriel, dress Celeborn in a dress and make him do the cha cha. Anything! I don't care!
person Anon
schedule March 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I refuse to give up on this story! ^^
person Lioncourt
schedule November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey, you still out there? Hope you're doing well...
person mientje
schedule November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please please don't let us wait fifteen years for the following chapters....this story is great , happy sex and no whining legolas ...I love it
person Lioncourt
schedule October 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
MMmmmm... I feel I can read this as many times as I want, and I will still not get tired of it. And just the thought of your Glorfindel STILL has me blushing every single time. I feel that I am perhaps beginning to get at bit too predictable... ^^

I have tried so many times to kidn.. I mean borrow, him from you. Just for a little while! *stares innocently* It's not as if I would try to keep him or anything! *hides handcuffs behind her back*
person breezieventrue
schedule September 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please continue and throw in some tickling in a fututre chapter please!
person Lioncourt
schedule June 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
"Elrond is ready to ride to Orophin's aid should we need him." That means Glorfindel will come too, right? Oh please let him come! I promise to have a welcome party ready for him. ;)
person othello
schedule June 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
well, its about time! where were you????? i was left all alone with absolutely no new good hot elf-sex, pining for the return of ertia! but the six chappies were worth the (excruciating) wait...suspensful, exciting, and HOT all the way through. can i make a request, though? could you maybe include a legolas/rumil scene somewhere in the future? hot pairing...though anything will be devoured by by slash-ravenous eyes!

love (and other indoor sports), othello
person Anon
schedule May 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I surely would like to see another chapter soon. *Peers over Ertia’s shoulder to see if she is writing *

My comments on the last one- Very good!! Well-written as always, hot sex yummy! But I have to agree with Aislynn on this one, the wiping of Haldir’s memories seems like the most horrible and severe breach of trust. After hundreds or even thousands of years of service!!! One can only hope that Galadriel now sees this as one of the worst mistakes of her 9000-year life. I hope she didn’t inflict the same punishment on Sevilin, ol’ Evil Sin, and had him banished instead. (Could he, perhaps be the on behind these recent attacks?)

When I think about what it must have been like for Orophin and Rumil when their brother’s memories were wiped, I think I would have considered packing up and leaving Lorien all together. Amazing they didn’t, and go on carrying on as if Galadriel and Celeborn are the best of leaders and friends to boot. It will be interesting to see how your explain this.

But however you explain it, please do so quickly!!!

- Gabby
person MarzBar
schedule May 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the chapter with so much exposition. It's good to know what happened to the fabulous March Warden. I'm amazed he even tolerates a courtesan around him at all. Loving this story.