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i hate you so much it actually hurts, am in tears gagging a little not to mention am f*****g numb, but do you know whats the most frigging painful thing of all is? i still want to read!! arrrghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh mawgy damn you and your twisted characters! *gingerly tries to touch and hug erestor at the same time whilst single handedly killing those other animals grrrr*

i love you really... *crawlsbackunderherrock*

wondreful very sad and angsty but so well written

thank you for updating...yes we are STILL reading please don't be too long ...we are dying out here.
we love this story waiting patiently for a happy ending.

From the very first chapter, I know I'll be hooked by this story. Very interesting, indeed. You have the yummiest characters and plot and settings to mold. The chapter 23 is very touching. I almost had tears in my eyes...Update soon, please. Your writing style becomes more smooth and beautiful at every chapters. I'm dying to think about the progress now that our pretty virgin had already been broken, physically and mentally...It's terrible to have his virginity be taken by brute objects and evil brutes... =__=
Oh, and to entertain you (I know writers love to know what the readers think about their characters), this is what I label each of your charas:
- Erestor : '100% UKE'. Need I say more? [wink wink] ^.* Blame his too much beauty and grace which is followed by too much fragility and hopelessness...Mwa ha ha...A most interesting object indeed to be owned and claimed and ravished and...bla bla bla...
- Glorfindel : He always switched between 'spoiled egoistic bad boy' and 'the young protector'...But I believe in him that he'll someday be Erestor's 'Handsome Prince on the white horse'... ^.^
- Natahl : At the beginning, I thought he was Erestor's 'Prince on the white horse' (well, to be honest, when he first appeared, I was looking forward to him and Glorfindel fight to the death to win Erestor), but it turns out that he's 'The Biggest Jerk Of The Year'... >__< Screw him to hell, I don't care...I bet he'll suit the Silindrical bitch.
- Silindrical : 'THE Bitch'.
- Earane : 'A loving father'. I'm worried about him so much. Poor father indeed.
- Galshor, Galdor, Ecthelion, Glorfindel's papa : 'ORCS AND URUK-HAI IN ELVES SKIN'.. -__- For the love of Valar, they are much WORSE than ORCS and URUK-HAI (at least, they don't torture and rape people based on their own whim, as far as I know they only kill people based on commands)...Yeah, go for them Glorfindel, castrate them for good...(Hm...I wonder how Glorfindel will take actions against Erestor's abuser...Will he dare make enemies out of his former comrades and his own papa for the sake of his beloved????? This is a heavy challenge, indeed...)
- And the last is YOU: Remember what I told you??? UPDATE SOON...!!!! ^.*

Yes, thank you for updating. This is a great story. I can't wait for more chapters and see if Erestor heals. Keep up the amazing work.

I'm having a difficult time seeing that this story is headed for a "pairing" -- it seems to be a hurt/comfort sort to me, but where's the comfort? Is Erestor going to convert Glorfindel to some consideration and tenderness? Well, I have been guiltily reading your story today, and it's only fair I tell you so. The reading of it is uncomfortable, butthen that is certainly your intention, yes?

Nooooooooo!!! You can't just leave it there!!
That may have been a difficult chapter to write, but it was very gripping. I just love your writing, and I can't wait to see how this story progresses...
More soon please!!!

VERY ENJOYABLE STORY HOPE 2 HEAR MORE SOON

*squeeee* Awww...Thats cute. Stupid guard guy....Okay, so maybe I should like him compaired to Glorfindel, but hey, I dont.
Glorfindel is, umm... well.... Warming up to him... Thats good.
I really like the story, corse I have read some pretty twisted things... Stupid guard, Poor Erestor.
Love the story, keep writing...
Jane

Hello, read the first chapter, and it looks really good, like the idea, but I have one small question, will your story end happy, or no? Cause I relly dont want to read something to depressing...
Jane