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March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, I just caught up with you...
I don't know what to say really;
I'm utterly flabbergasted by your extraordinary talent for tale-weaving and your sheer mastery of the english vocabulary. something I happen to be partial to.
As said in my previous review, I'm a bit weary of WIPs, but this one was barbed and wouldn't let go, hehe. I hope you keep getting inspired as this story seems nowhere near finished, despite its present magnitude.
One question, if you can spare the time. There is this one [or two?] chapters where Legolas 'delivers' Lindalcon to Lorien and stays put in a talan, courtesy of Rumil. This seems strangely out of synch with the timeline, as I'd situate such a course of events AFTER the ongoing Erebor retrial... [I caught up on the Sentinel, incl. ch. 99] Why was this course of events disclosed so early on?
Thank you for sharing this wondrous work of fiction, I cherish it and will certainly reread it. Quite a few established authors [and I don't mean on the net] would do well to take a pointer or two by you...
I don't know what to say really;
I'm utterly flabbergasted by your extraordinary talent for tale-weaving and your sheer mastery of the english vocabulary. something I happen to be partial to.
As said in my previous review, I'm a bit weary of WIPs, but this one was barbed and wouldn't let go, hehe. I hope you keep getting inspired as this story seems nowhere near finished, despite its present magnitude.
One question, if you can spare the time. There is this one [or two?] chapters where Legolas 'delivers' Lindalcon to Lorien and stays put in a talan, courtesy of Rumil. This seems strangely out of synch with the timeline, as I'd situate such a course of events AFTER the ongoing Erebor retrial... [I caught up on the Sentinel, incl. ch. 99] Why was this course of events disclosed so early on?
Thank you for sharing this wondrous work of fiction, I cherish it and will certainly reread it. Quite a few established authors [and I don't mean on the net] would do well to take a pointer or two by you...
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February 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I thought of something, one reasone Thranduil might not want Legolas around Gwilwilith is because he does not seem capible of being able to say "no" to her
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February 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
perhaps he will only forget after Taglen came in
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February 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay.
I'll keep this brief.
You must have heard it all before.
I don't go for WIPs. But I took a sample, of 'Feud'.
Sort of.
Never stopped reading until chapter 18?!
You messed up my weekend, author!
Seriously though.
I'm baffled.
You have a fantastic descriptive narrative, Talespinner!
I'm so hooked.
I dread the moment I catch up with you...
All the same, thank you for sharing your talent and inspiration.
I happen to like darkfic very much and your slashy description are downright erotic.
You don't confuse being graphic with a writing a technical manual.
Also, your characters are well-defined and consistent.
Did I mention I like this 'Feud' very much?
I'll keep this brief.
You must have heard it all before.
I don't go for WIPs. But I took a sample, of 'Feud'.
Sort of.
Never stopped reading until chapter 18?!
You messed up my weekend, author!
Seriously though.
I'm baffled.
You have a fantastic descriptive narrative, Talespinner!
I'm so hooked.
I dread the moment I catch up with you...
All the same, thank you for sharing your talent and inspiration.
I happen to like darkfic very much and your slashy description are downright erotic.
You don't confuse being graphic with a writing a technical manual.
Also, your characters are well-defined and consistent.
Did I mention I like this 'Feud' very much?
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February 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Noooooooooooooo! Grrrr, cliffhanger!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please update soon!! Or else I'll see if I can gather a mob together and toss you in an enchanted river!! And forbit Leggy to catch you in a death-defying display of acrobatics that would otherwise be waaaaaaaay cool!!! Darn, then again, I imagine the memory loss due to river-exposure would rather slow the updating process further.... please strike my aforementioned threat....... Hehe.
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February 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! OMG! Ah, No, eek... Poor Legolas... Just out of interest, but what have you been feeding this plot bunny of yours? It's amazing... But when is Celeborn going to turn up? Or someone from the past... It will just be TOO awful if he forgets Legolas. *sobs uncontrolably*
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February 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful. Written exceptionally well...
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February 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well worth the wait!
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February 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
defantely looking foward to the next instarment of Feud
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February 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank you Thank you Thank you!!!!!!!!! :) That was absolutely what I needed!!