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EEK! where do I *begin*? Another splendid chapter. One that answered some questions. Winding down??? Not really something I wanna hear, lol. Ooh! If Feud is ending...I've read some really great fics featuring Elrohir/Legolas. :;gets down on knees:: Would u consider writng one centering around that couple? There is so little known about him that he is almost an oc. He's got the basic background info but there is practically nothing said about his personality. Elrohir has been portrayed as extremely loyal and unswervingly steadfast in his unconditional love for Legolas in Imladris and Greenleaf. I loved that. But I think I'd love anything you'd come up with regarding those two.

LOL. But back to this story. You've indicated that Legolas knows what Thranny's second (bastard of a) wife is hiding. What *is* it? Did I miss her confession out there somewhere? Was what she said to Thranduil the full extent of it all? Will you punish her as she so richly deserves?? (You do have a malicious bone in you body don't you? After all, you just said that you'll be leaving us with a cliff-hanger on virtually every subsequent chapter...) Will Thranduil ever reclaim his hum---elfanity??

I think its absolutely sad that Legolas' uncles had shown him more compassion in the brief time they had known him than his father has had all his life. In that fleeting encounter, they saw his worth.
You don't have any plans to tell us how the two little kids grow up, do you? How their relationship or lack thereof with legolas developes?
Do u have a mailing/notification list? Do u plan on returning to ff.net, or have you given it up? I'd get emails if you update there...

I'm not usually a reviewer but I make exceptions for the stories I enjoy most and yours is definitly one of them! I think your portayal of the different characters is amazing. You made me care about your OC, as if I knew of them as long as I have the Tolkien's ones. You are truly gifted and I await the next chapter impatiently! I too,like others have said, like very much the way you portrayed the twins in this story.Their reaction to the discovery of their father's actions is very just. I sense two things going on with them: first, their horror about the extent of malignence employed by Elrond in his pursuit of Legolas; but IMO they would have feel (almost) the same thing had the culprit been any other elf. Second there is always that disgust when a child think about one's parent sexuality.Gross! And it is about thinking of a "normal" sexual relationship between loving individuals not the degrading and hurtful one Elrond impose upon Legolas. No wonder the twins would feel torn and betrayed! I also love Erestor in this. He redeem himself quite wonderfully in my eyes! I am anxious to see how everything will play out once he is awake. And Trandhuil? He deserve a couple of blows to the head from Radagast's staff! Perhaps it would knock some sense into him. But enough with my ramblings! Please update soon and be asured that I will be there reading eagerly! A humble fan of your work, Diane

OOOOOOMG! EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!! WHen are you next updating! Its sooooo hard to read this!!! Its hurts when you reach the end! Ugh! frustration to the extreme. Reallly. Perhaps you shouldn't make it so damned good. Its be easier to take!


But LOVE it. Really, you have me cursing thranduil out loud (and I mean strings!), shivering in disgust (of his treatment towards his son), of his new wife (the bastard!! marrying another one too!). BTW, what happened to Legolas??? Anyways, (see how bad you've affected me? My thoughts are just as discobobulated as that crowd!!) ....UPDATE!!!

How many chapters do you think are left in this? Please say another 100. Or at least 30 more. I'd die if this is to end any time soon.


AND WHY DID U GET KNOCKED OFF FF.net AGAIN???? HERE I was, waiting for you to update, thinking that perhaps you've left us hanging! Good thing, a friend of mine searched for your fic and found it here!! Really, though, it must be because of jealousy. I've only seen perhaps one or two other fics in which the (human/elf) emotions/pysche is explored to such a scale, and whose plot is so richly developed. Truly, despite some possible disagreeable content, this fic in its entire is a crime to delete.




Caio!
I'm off to check that other fic which Features Lil'las and a nice Thrandy! (what do u have against Thranduil loving his mother anyways?)

Did you have any idea that this was where you would end up when you started this fic. it seemed so natural a progression through all of hte many trials and tribulations of a young elf's tortured life. He seemed so innocent when this all began. And now nearly 100 chapters... unbelievable.
I had almost forgiven Thranduil before these chapters. And now, as soon as he sees weakness, he is exploiting again. wheedling for his own life, playing the crowd for support. He's nothing but a bully, just like his father was. I really despise him. he deserves no mercy. Let the trapped souls feed upon him before they are freed. I could care no less.
I do fear for Legolas, though. He is injured and in a place he has long feared. Get him out of there soon please!

Lovely fight scene. Of course, I was rather hoping Thranduil would get a proper pummeling. Celeborn has perfect timing.

Hola Erobey. Tienes mucho talento para escribir, es un placer leer "Feud"...

Poor Legolas...

So what is wrong with Thranduil, could you explain it to me?

I feel bad as your account on FF.net... this is feeling worst (Pardon on my english).

I hope to find more chapters of this angsty story of yours.

Thank you for writing it, and I hope to read more of it.

Keep up the PERFECT work that you are doing with your fic, and tried to update asap... please?

Love you, and always in my heart, as I keep calling to Leggy to come hope... to me... lol!

Sivan

A very powerful chapter. Very riveting! I love the way you are bringing all this together. I'll be excited to see more.

I thought you told me you weren't posting the two chapters before the last one because you didn't want to leave us with a cliffhanger!... and then you left us with this one!

Hola. Ésta es una de las mejores historias que he leido. Es un relato maravilloso...