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by narcolinde

person Lady of Legolas
schedule June 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very good to see it here.I've been reading this from the start at ff.net.
person Gwilith
schedule June 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I second everything that Mainframote ote in their reveiw only I couldn't say it so well or so eloquently.
I love this story and especially this wild, natural Legolas. Please update soon!
person Mainframe
schedule June 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Greetings!

I've just come across your story and have been completely blown away by it!

This storyline is brilliant and covers so much ground with Legolas background, Mirkwood religious beliefs, ulterior motives, hurt, suffering and the strength one elf finds within himself to survive.

Like I said, I love this!

I adored this last chapter in particular as it dealt mainly with Legolas solo and his heightened link with nature and how he has almost become more a nature spirit than an elf. Everything accepts him and welcomes him into the fold with no ulterior motives, no expectations just acceptance. It's beautifully written and I had to re-read it twice to fully appreciate just how much work you have woven into the fabric that makes up the characters surround. Very easy to read and become completely immured in the plot.

I am curios to the point of no return with who? And why? Someone sort to bring down the Prince. And I do NOT believe that that rock slide was an accident! Is Thranduil and his sons involved? Is the mother of the child who claimed Legolas' Princeship the one? What of the sick pervert who get's off one pain and degradation? (That character is a sick puppy).

Many Thanks for all your work so far and will read more when you post.

Mainframe

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