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by narcolinde

person Mourning Elektra
schedule August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The latest chapter brought tears to my eyes. What a story! That was outstanding work!
person Shanna
schedule July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hola. Wonderful, like always. It is a pleasure to read this one story...
person Jaylen
schedule July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow!! What a great last chapter. I was so happy to finally see Legolas and Thranduil going at it and resolving a few issues. You did such a great job of portraying their emotions. Thranduil did not suddenly say "oh my son, I've been stupid, I love you" No- He says, I don't have feelings for him like my youngest. The emotions are very realistic. It was also very realistic the way Legolas reverts to his inner child and says I want my mother back. It's funny how we all revert to a child to some extent, when we are hurt or upset. Are you a psych major? You always do such a thorough job of taking apart and presenting all aspects of the characters psyche. Well, from a readers point of view, these last chapters were very rewarding.
Thanks so much,
Jaylen
person JastaElf
schedule July 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, what an amazing pair of chapters!! I'm delighted that Legolas has decided to take their advice and go woo his Berenaur.... and I like him seeking a ring in his father's hoard. I was terrified, however, that he would find the One Ring in there and slip it on, and all hell would break loose.... :-)

The scene between Legolas and Thranduil is positively heart-rending--from both standpoints. That Thranduil has a desperately wounded inner Elfling I do not doubt in the least! And that Legolas is still hurting from his childhood, this we know... but to have two inner Elflings battling in pain for some kind of assuagement--Ai! What wonderful angst!!

I had been hoping for a scene like this between the two... and you have delivered in a magnificent manner!! :-) Thank you SO much! I actually LIKE Thranduil in this... esp. since he gives Legolas the binding Ring of Oropher. Just lovely!!

I can't wait to see what happens next.... Thank you SO much!!

Love you, Jasta
person Ash
schedule July 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was kind of dark... O.O Hell of a good chapter, though! Maltahondo's finally paid the price for what he did to Legolas, and Aragorn witnessed the very torture that he was put through. *sniff* Little Lindalcon's all grown up. Awesome chapter! 102 chapters, you're really gettin' up there ^_^
person Shanna
schedule July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hola Erobey, you are a wonderful writer. Feud is impressive...amazing... Hasta pronto, saludos.
person JastaElf
schedule July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my ERU!!! So it IS true--Erestor does not remember!! AI!!!!! Poor Legolas--his heart will break!!!

What an incredible chapter! I'm going to have to read and re-read it many a time before it is wholly comprehended... but wow, oh my lord, what wonderful angst and darkness and sorrow!!

I live in fear of the next chapter... I know eventually Legolas will have some kind of justice and closure, but it is just too cruel of circumstance to take away from him the one love he has ever had! And I sure as heck don't mean Maltahondo!!!

Ai!!! My poor Elfling....

Wonderful chapter. Sorrow upon sorrow, but so well crafted as always.... I give you many hugs!!!!

Jasta
person Shelly
schedule July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sorry about my absence! I don't read slash anymore, but I think your story will be an exception, since I read it for so long. I skimmed this latest chapter, and holy crap! I am going to have to go back and reread from where I stopped. Nice job still! I am going to try and catch up, and keep up reviewing! I hope the ending is happy...*wink*
person sivan325
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So, what is going on with Erestor and not to mention our poor Elf?

Btw, I add you to my LJ.

I found it difficult to find when you update, as I'm barely on this site, and I'm getting used to alarms, so I hope that you could forgive me, and I *didn't* abandoned your story, so no fear.

Keep up the PERFECT work that you are doing with your fic, and UPDATE ASAP!

Always in your debt, as I love your stories,

Sivan Shemesh
person Ithil
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! Thak you!