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i cant believe i stumbled upon this story just now!
wow it's beautiful!
you writing is so good, you had me crying several times already!
i'm fying to know, what will happen to legolas? when will he release the two other warriors?who is his real father?
will he die of grief?
and what the hell is up with elrond?
i'm assuming his lover is gil-galad, right?
also how long do will it be before legolas will join the quest to destroy the ring?
please update soon, i'm dying to know what happens next.
also poor leggy, i cant help but cry for him everytime someone hurts him, when will he get a break?

The world is so cruel and insecure for Legolas.
I really admire him for surviving this.
Will there be happy days in his life?
How far should he go?

Please, update soon.
I'm living to read your story these days.

Ch. 23: I wish for a strong gale to rush in through Tawar and blow both Elrond and his noble genitals right off the talan, crashing him onto the forest floor, and breaking every bone in his Noldor body! Sorry for that emotional outburst, but that is the way this story affects me. Another wonderful chapter. The complexity of Elrond's character gets better and better, and the plot thickens delightfully. Now I must summon the patience to wait and find out what Erestor will attempt towards our feral elf. Poor Legolas--nearly cried when I read the line about his fng tng that he attracts those who hurt him like Elrond did, but didn't know why or how to change it. It's so tragically true. He must start listening to those instinctive flutterings in his stomach, as they are trying to warn him! The story continues to fascinate and your writing continues to excel. Thank you!

Ch. 22--This update made my weekend! This feral elf you've drawn is quite a remarkable tragic character. I can see again in this chapter in his interaction with Elrond how Legolas continues to think so differently from those around him, primarily concerned with the feelings of others when present rather than himself. He has more reason that anyone to fill his heart with thoughts of hate and revenge, constantly plotting as all those around him do, but no--it's not even conceivable for him, both a blessing and a curse. I can see why Mithrandir saw something special in him and knew he was meant for a greater purpose. And Elrond is such an interesting character in this tale. I've known people just like him that seem to have one side that is caring and concerned with the welfare of another, and a seemingly diametrically opposed side that uses and abuses those he seems to care for to achieve his own ambitions. Intriguing to imagine where this latest, very emotional encounter will take them. The description of Tawar's history and interaction with Legolas, fromore ore his birth, is fascinating. I take solace in the trees myself, though I don't climb them. Thinking of them as taking care of Legolas is very touching. And Legolas' realizations of the truth about hisher her and Malthen was heartbreaking but handled so well so as not to be cloying. Finally, I miss Fearfaron, and thus was thrilled by his letter. Thank you!

(For the three last chapters)
Arg... I knew there was something up and that it was not Erestor. But I have never suspected that guy to be ElrondAnd And I find him horrible. How could he be so heartless and punish Legolas for something that happened so many years ago, when he was not even born. Tss... Nasty Elrond... I wass feeling really sorry for Legolas, especially when he thought of his relationship with M. It should be terrible to realize such things.
I was surprised to see Elrond so 'nice' in the last chapter. Well... Perhaps Legolas' grief echoed his own. I am hopeless, i know, but I hope something good will happen between them, that they will both heal the wounds of their hearts. But Elrond would have to tell the truth to L about him, and that wouldn't be an easy task...
Special mention to the description of the bond between the elves and the forest. It was beautiful.
Great story.
Thanks
Cas

I've been following this story on LIC, but am glad to see it getting exposure in other places as well. The word that best sums up your tale for me is "astonishing." Your writing has great literary quality, going far beyond what one would normally expect in fanfiction. The complexity of your characters, as well as the intricacy with which you paint their emotional lives, makes them absolutely compelling. Each OC is expertly drawn, and your superb rendering of the well-known and oft written about characters makes them come alive like never before. Your treatment of the forest as a living, breathing character, and the detail with which you describe the elves and their relationship to it, makes this story outshine any others I've read. Absolutely first-rate. The emotional depth and anguish you bring forth is heartbreaking and utterly realistic without being blatantly manipulative, and has produced a visceral reaction and tears from me many, many times--not easy to do. The political intrigue involving multiple characters with varying motives is handled with great care--never muddled, always plausible, continually fascinating--yet is subtle enough that we must keep guessing. And your handling of erotica deserves high-praise. For once, I've found an author who doesn't use the tired, worn o"sta"standard" phrases for sexual activity that seem to plague most less imaginative slash fanfiction. Additionally, your characters' sexual encounters are much like in real life--messy, complicated, and often heartbreaking. To sum up, every paragraph of this tale is a precious gift, and I thank you for sharing your unique talent, preparation, and hard work with your readers.

Each paragraph, each chapter is so rich, so loaded with meaning and portent.
I slowly savor and then reread each new entry. Love the angst, the intrigue, and
all your marvelous characters. I cnly nly pray that someday someone will truly
love and appreciate your beautiful, tortured, sensual Legolas . . .

Wow... I don't know whether to commend you or curse you. Your writing is exceptional as always but I can't remember the last time I have been more disturbed by a story. The cruelty of Elrond's actions takes my breath away. I never thought I would ever find myself liking Erestor more.

What I found most surprising was the the thing that disturbed me the most was the earring. The though of marring in suc a way Legolas seems almost defiling. As if Elrond would be makinm asm as property, a possession. The thought of this turns my stomach. PLEASE don't put that earring into his ear! It seems a further rape of his body.

I am really anxious to see where you go from here. I am so involved in this story that hurts to Legolas wound me as well. Be kind! I don't know how much more we can take. se use update soon so that I can resume breathing.

Forgive my lateness in catching up with all your updates. You know how much I absolutely adore this story. This last chapter was certainly fulfilling for both Legolas and me. Finally, some of that highly charged tension has been relieved. Can't wait for the morning after though. This should be very interesting.

Once again, your writing is impeccable. I have to admit, I really like your diverse use of the English language to describe love scenes. The same old words get pretty boring after awhile.

Your marvelous imagination and amazingly descriptive text continue to
delight. Love it that I'm still uncertain where you are headed and how
you will get there. Thank you for your hard work and Please make it a
lengthy and complete ride!