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by narcolinde

person louise_oblique
schedule November 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow!!!!!!!!! can't wait for next update! yes yes yes thurdy whooped! lol! perfect!love your origional characters, but god it Thrudy horrible, with how he acts towards legolas and his step son, epp! do admit i hope thrudy is legolas's father though so he would still be heir to Mirkwood as well as getting rid of the insest issue as legolas really neds a break though there is still loads of great milage in the strand of the plot. anyway looking forward to more.

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louise
person Steph
schedule November 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ch 36 & 37 - I am so happy with this latest update! I like that you took us back to Mirkwood. I think it is wonderful to get the reactions Legolas' activities have caused among the wood elves in the past five or more y. I. I hope to see him appreciated to say the least. This is a refreshing shift from the heavy angst from the previous chapters, but that is by no means a complaint. Your story is beautifully done overall, and Legolas' fate has been enthralling to follow in this. This is just a good break from the illustrations of his grief. Thank you for the update...lovely!
person gej§ e
schedule November 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I just finished catching up on your story. You really have a gift foscriscription. It made the whole story very real and layered.
This is really an angst fest isn't it? I love angst.
I have been reading a few L/E stories lately and am really enjoying them. This E is really a r*t b*st*rd isn't he? I can't wait to see the repercussions to the latest outrage he is perpetrating. Poor L is really being put throught the wringer in this one.
I can't wait to see where you are going in this . Thanks for such a long and involved story. giggle
person Diana
schedule November 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I'm thoroughly impressed with this story. It's very original and well-written. I love how well you've managed to communicate Legolas' kinship with the forest. I'm also pleased to see the use of Radagast in this story. His general absense in both Tolkien and fanfiction has always disappointed me.

I do hope you end up ending dear Legolas' solitude eventually. The poor dear deserves to see an end to his troubles and to find a lover who deserves and worships him. Bit depressing to see that Elrond may never be able to fit this bill. No misunderstandings can redeem his vengeful disregard of Legolas' reputation and physical/spiritual health. He manages to negate any good deeds he commits with bad ones almost as soon as they come to pass! Still, it is hard to let go of the prospect of this pairing, as I always have rather liked it. Aragorn's appece ice in the story brings me hope as well, yet I don't imagine you'll go in that direction but I'd be pleased to see it anyway *crosses her fingers anyway* I think I'd be happy with just about anypairing though, just so long as our beloved archer ends up happy and loved. And not with Malthen! *doesn't like him*

Anyway, I can't wait to see more and will keep checking back for new chapters of this story. Much praise!
person louise_oblique
schedule November 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
very cool and col cutting gandelf. legolas as brill as usual. sorry short review very ill will cold :(
thanks for cheering me up

louise
person louise_oblique
schedule November 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
very cool and col cutting gandelf. legolas as brill as usual. sorry short review very ill will cold :(
thanks for cheering me up

louise
person louise_oblique
schedule November 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
very cool and col cutting gandelf. legolas as brill as usual. sorry short review very ill will cold :(
thanks for cheering me up

louise
person funkycharms21
schedule October 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
absolutly beautiful!
i loved this chapter so much!
sorry for not reviewing the last few chapters! have been too busy to even get to the computer at all!
but after reading this chapter, i knew i had to atleast drop you a line!
this is by far one of the best stories i had ever had the pleasure of reading!
and this chapter is remarkable!
though i know Elrond is very jealous after seeing Legolas and Erestor, i still dont liim! im!
i feel sorry for him, but sending that cloth with Legolas' blood is too much! does he really want him to die?
he is a healer, but it seems as though Erestor has done more healing to Legolas, than he did!
not to mention that he must be able to see that Legolas is very near thee ofe of his endurance, can he not?
i wish i already knew what would happen when Thranduil will get that cloth!
also loved the scene between Gandalf and Legolas, and i was sure that Thranduil is Legolas' father, i wonder whether that will in future make a diffrence between them?
also wondered whether Gandlaf will take Legolas to Fearfaron, it does seem the best place to take him to, now.
and i suppose we are a step closer to when Gandalf will reveal Elrond's name and identity to Legolas, cant wait!
also glad to see Aragorn! any romance between him and Legolas? or perhaps blosseming friendship?
i wonder what he will think of Elrond's behaviour?
well, i think i've talked too much! sorry!
loved it as usual! cant wait for another one, please?


person Breach Cannon all must die!
schedule October 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Where is home for Legolas
person Steph
schedule October 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I wasn't expecting to see Aragorn! This just geetteetter and better. Is that really possible? The twists and turns you take us all on is absolutely amazing. I would love to see Aragorn champion our wood elf! Thank you so much for this update!