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You're alive! I was getting worried. Happy New Year!!! Another excellent chapter, things are REALLY heating up.
BTW, sorry I keep converting my reviews from one website to another, it's just easier this way. Anyway, write more soon!

I can't wait until the next chapter. Your story is really picking up speed!! It has been very interesting and emotional from the start but your plot is getting sooooo good. I really have no clue where you are going to take this story, but I hope it ends well for Legolas. He has been through so much, I was kind of hoping that Thranduil was his real father, but I guess the King is pretty scummy. Please tell me that Maltahondo is not his father!!!! I can't believe he would use own own son like he did. Make up a whole new character, just not Maltahondo! Oh Well.... I will just have to wait and see what you have in store for us.
Jayla

What an absolutly fantstic chapter, i stayed up to read. you have really blown me away, this fic gets better and better. full of intrigue and belivavble origional characters and good characterisations of principles. i love this fic. by the way th for for your comment a few posts ago, i feel the same *blushes* thats so nice :). yep as you can guess finally got time to read and had a lot to read which was very nice. legolas is really really going through it. he deffinetly has more nobilite in one little toe than a hundred thrudy's.

anyway hope you had a good xmas, i was in sweden and just got back recently, unfortunatly have nasty flu and then my uni examsrt ort on monday, meeepp!!!!

anyway hope you are well and HAPPY NEW YEAR

huggs
louise

Chapter 18
Your summary was great. Half elven, half lies.
Rain in the woods with no shelter. Not a good thing. I think things and elves are going to get crabby.
Now Legolas is alone with an elf who has a really complicated agenda. Not good for TawarWaith. H is using the best butter I see. Poor Legolas doesn't stand a chance against his blandishments.
I am Erestor. Another lie. Erestor is not a healer.
Legolas is so noble. He will never be a traitor to his Tawar. Unfortunately "Erestor" is not a noble elf, at least in your story so miscommunication would be inevitable.
So he thinks Legolas is dangerous. He may still underestimating him. giggle

Wow, it had been a while since I read this. You have updated alot.

I like the direction it is going, and I am glad that Lord Elrond is to be held acocuntable for what he did to Legolas. Poor little elf. Lord Elrond needs to be hung by his balls for what he has done. I don't know your feelings for a Legolas/Aragorn relationship, but I think Legolas needs someone that will love him for him and not all this other nonsense.

One last thing: WHO'S THE DADDY?!

I just read ch 37, and I absolutely loved it. I think more happened here than in any chapter of late. I love that Legolas has finally got Gandalf and Estel on his side, and I like how you made them aware of all that he has been through. I also love the last paragraph. Legolas is so miserable and hurt that he has seemed to use it as fuel for a determination to see an end to it all. I hope to see those who deserve it get their due soon. I would also love to see an entrance of Glorfindel. I'm curious as to how he would react to all of this. This has been an amazing read all the way, and I'm continually amazed with how creative you are. Thank you for sharing!

Poor, poor Legolas! Man, our beloved elf never gets a break, does he? *sniff*
Another wonderful, emotionally intense chapter. I am so glad that Aragorn and Gandalf are sticking by Legolas thorugh this despite their close ties to Elrond. I doubt he could take another betrayal.

One bit had me really worried, however; when Gandalf thought "When this day was done, the Legolas he knew would be no more."
What Legolas has gone through must be incredibly eonalonally scarring, yet I hope it doesn't change him too much. I love the fierce and innocent warrior that you have created and I'm affraid of him losing that innocence and becoming jaded. If that happened, he really would be Legolas no longer, and not the elf that we love so much. Hopefully Gandalf beinbeing overly pessimistic in light of the recent revelations. I knoewt ift if anyone could bounce back, it's Legolas.

Anyway, thank you for the chapter and I can't wait for more.

Good. Legolas has decided to take a stand. I hope Elrond gets his b*tt kicked but good. I know we still have Thranduil's plot (if it was indeed his) revealed and taken care of. Also Elrond's fate and the two other elves who died in battle. Of course this may not have been L's fault so he may not have to work any more for this. He can concentrate on his beloved forest. I'm sure I have left out other things that need clarifying but I look forward to learning about them.

Lots of anger and angst in this chapter.so tso two words I had to look up. I love when I learn new words.

This is such a satisfying story. In a ry goy good story no one really wins or loses. We all, the characters and the readers, learn things about them/ourselves and life. Even if none of us will ever have to cope with Middle Earth we have to cope with our own lives. Seeing others deal with difficult situations, betrayal, anger, pain, makes us think through our responses to these self-same situations.

I love this story. Thanks for the update. giggle

Thanks for the comments. But, don't worry, it won't just be the early chapters, I'm slowly getting round to all the others as well, it just takes time, something I am very short of at the moment. Which, also explains why there hasn't been anything added to my fic for ages, but don't worry, I have a bit done for the next chapter. I'll let you know when I get it done and posted. Though, I did add a chapter about 2 months ago, did you read that?

Now, again, I will get round to the other chapters, it just may take me a while to catch up. I would ask you to stop posting just so I can get up to where you are, but I LOVE this fic WAY TOO MUCH to ask for somethign like that, s'll 'll just have to set aside an afternoon sometime soon and review everything.

And, how could I not tell you had missed out some of one of your chapters? This story is WAY too addictive to read some, know there is still half a chapter out there somewhere and not ask to gain access to it.

Thanks again for your comments,

Luv Mawgy.

Wrath of Arda now that is an interesting name.

By the way Elrond is in BIG trouble I think, after this even Aragorn will likely be displeased with him. Though I don't see him the way you portray him in this fic. I don't see Thranduil that way either