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by narcolinde

person Autore
schedule January 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Note to self: do NOT read bloody/incestuous/nightmare scenes while drinking vanilla coke. Does NOT go down well. Now I'm going to be all jaded. All people are selfish, brutal bastards, except for the occassional wizard/ exiled king/ oddball elf. Legolas needs more of them, if he's gonna survive 'til LotR. *Hisses at Thranduil* Looking forward to more... just not with v-coke...
person louise_oblique
schedule January 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG shocked, very powerful, well done. sorry short bedtime :)

huggs
louise
person Mawgy
schedule January 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 35

YAY! Go Gandalf! Just goes to show Homer Simpson is wrong, and that old people are useful.

Ummm, that's it for this chapter, I'm afraid. Although it's a wonderfully written and much needed chapter, it is pretty much just a battle scene and all I can think of to say is "Woohoo! Neither Gandalf or Aragorn died!" Let's just hope the same can be said for leggy. ;)

Luv Mawgy
person Mawgy
schedule January 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 36 (almost don
OH
OH! Wonderful! Not only *another* brilliant chapter, but it was so descriptive I could just see Leggy swinging and dodging and killing... Excellent!

Oh, but I felt so sorry for Leggy when the horses didn't want anything to do with him. Though I bet it gave Gandalf a good shock to see this otherwise placid elf so bloodthristy when he returned.

ARThe The truth will eventually come out! You have no idea how long I've been waiting for this! For someone to give Leggy their true identities, I'm just SO glad you've finally decided to for the truth to come out before I grew an ulcer stressing and waiting for it all to come out!

And, I liked the little argument Leggy and Aragorn had. I don't know why. Maybe it's because they had just come out of a battle and need to rest and heal, and get away from the area in case ais sis sis still around, yet they make time to argue. I just think it's quite good. That, and also what they are actually fighting about. Kinda brings it all into perspective for Leggy and how much his home means to him.

Luv Mawgy
person Mawgy
schedule January 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 24

Hmmm, you know, I think I rather like Leggy when he is drunk. Especially when he dropped his knife and picked it up again without knowing how it got onto the ground in the first place! Very good!

Oooooh, Leggy has forced a Nazgul into battle, how very brave of him, or stupid. But still, quite courageous none-the-less.

Hehe, poor Erestor, being tricked into confessing he was watching Leggy, though I hardly blame him. Leggy truly is a 'hard to resist temptation.'

Luv Mawgy
person Mawgy
schedule January 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 25

Oh, Radagast is EXACTLY how I always imagined him to be! It's so wonderful when the books and fanfiction come together like that to create the same character twice, yet have him be the same way in both yet reach the same conclusions of his personality independently.

Oh, and that poor human vilaage, and how all the children came bounding up to Leggy the first moment they saw him, wonderful! Yet so sad at the same time for Leggy looked to see who was missing.

"What sort of character did this elf think he possessed?"

Well, Elrond, you've hardly been kind to him from the first moment you met Leggy, now have you? Of course he is going to question your character! Gee, even some Elves can't see past the end of their noses! Sheesh!

Luv Mawgy

person Mawgy
schedule January 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 26

Ooooh, I there really is nothing sexually frightening about an Elf, is there? Hmmm, pity I couldn't have been one of the girls in the hut, still I at least have my imagination! :P

Ooooh, what could Thranduil's vault possibly have to do with the Nazgul, I wonder? Only one way I'll find out... on to chapter 27.

Luv Mawgy
person Mawgy
schedule January 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 27

FINALLY! A little comfort from ElroNow,Now, was that REALLY hard, my Lord?

"He comprehends more about those inanimate baubles than he does about any living being in his Realm!" Oh, poor Leggy, he's always been second best to his father, yet knowing his life is worth less than even the most smallest and invaluable of Thranduil's treasures must be too much to handle at times. No wonder he eventually has a breakdown. IN fact, I'm surprised he hasn't had one before.

"I really see no reason for me to be uncomfortable in my own home," hehe! I bet Erestor becomes VERY uncomfortable, VERY soon with a naked Legolas sitting merely inches in front of him! *g*

Luv Mawgy


person Mawgy
schedule January 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 28

Oh, poor Leggy, even years after he was almost raped by that guy whose name I can't remember, and thoughts of that night come back to him! I'm just glad Erestor is with him and not Elrond, or Leggy could have been in trouble. But, luckily, it is not the lord, but instead the kind and thoughful elf that only wants what is best for Leggy, even if he does not show it all the time.

And, may I just say? This has got ot be one of the BEST sex scenes I have EVER read! Both in length and content. It's hot and full of poassion, yet sweet and most importantly, Leggy does not get harmed by it, well, except at the beginning when he realises he is using the knife to arouse Erestor, but that he more or less brought upon himself, rather than his lover hurt him.

Luv Mawgy
person Mawgy
schedule January 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 29

YAY! Leggygets to finally be the one to enter another! TRust Erestor to be the first one to show him new pleasures.

Hehe, and Erestor finally got what he wanted and came inside Leggy's mouth. How sweet. Pity as tas taken Leggy so long to find out how making love should be.

Luv Mawgy