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by narcolinde

person Kryspen
schedule June 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So satisfying to see some kindness and justice given to Legolas after his many years of selflessness and suffering. LOVE IT!!!
Do you mind me announcing your chapters on The_Galadhrim? Just slap my hands if you would rather do it yourself ^_^ hugs!
person kirameki
schedule June 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh! Things are really heating up now. XD I just love how you are portraying everyone so far. =3 I knew they would be fair to their Tirno. XD And as for sneaking in Lindalcon's pov of what he heard his mather and Thrandy saying was also well done. I can't wait for more. *pleading puppy dog eyes*
~*~Stephie P.
ps. Thanks for being so supportive with my own story. I really appreciate it. =3
person anais
schedule June 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ha! eat that Thranduil, you jerk!
I hope Meril will pay, too.
person Kryspen
schedule June 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is so cool.... I am just totally RIVETED here! Excellent as always!
person Calenharn Elflover
schedule June 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oooo, excellent beginning to the Council of Erebor! Lots of teasing hints to come of evil plots to be revealed. The Sylvan folk rallying around Legolas. Lindalcon, in the aftermath of his grief, standing tall and confident and adult - so poignant. Thranduil's anger mounting - I fear that he is certain to make good on his threats and demand evidence from the witnesses to the destroyed letter.

Eagerly looking forward to the next chapter!
person Anais
schedule June 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think I don't like Thranduil, but I *know* I profoundly dislike Meril. What a bitch.
person kirameki
schedule May 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ooooooh! *whistles* Boy, Legolas is in for it now, eh? But I have hope. After all won't the Tawarwaith gain sympathy if he gets in front of everyone and says he just wanted to see his baby brother since he'll most likely never get another chance. Boy, that'd cause a shock with the Council. =3 Not to mention Thranduil... Guilt trip. Nyahahaha. It really sucks that Aiwendil knocked out Talagan causing Legolas to be blamed. Was noone else around to refute it? I mean other than Legolas' friends. And I really dislike Meril. Aside from her scheming when it came to becoming the king's new consort, she really just gets under my skin. I love Legolas' new siblings, but Meril really sickens me. -_-; Ugh. Especially her awful lies now. Legolas was not threatening the child in the least and she darn well knows it. X( grrr.... Anyways. You have me on the edge of my seat (as always) XD I hope you give us more soon. So the meeting was finally called, eh. This should be good. *shivers in expectation*
person louise_oblique
schedule May 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
fantastic! poor legolas

love this fic

huggs
louise
person louise_oblique
schedule May 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
sorry for reviewing more than once and the expletive in the other, the comment was directed at my computer and I'm so tired I must have written it, opps. sorry was just discharged from hospital yesterday so I'll blame that, yep uni girl going through nasty exams and going to SA but had a reaction to one of my injections urghhh and got ill and collapsed in an exam *sigh* Sorry ranting *blames medication*

Anyway I love your work, good night :)

huggs
louise
person Calenharn Elflover
schedule May 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Meril's accusing Legolas of trying to harm the babe?! *eyes bug* Lying witch!

Another cliffie! Trapped inside Legolas' room... all the warriors on alert... how is Legolas going to get out of this one?