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So, Lindalcon has fled (or will flee?) to Lorien? That is hardly going to make Meril feel any warmer towards Legolas! In fact, I think there is a risk he will be blamed for foul play, once he returns to Mirkwood. (If and when this all plays out.)

And there is some grave danger if Legolas come to Lorien too soon? What (other than the hatred of the refugee guards)?

I have been following your story for such a long time and the story just keeps on getting better and better with even more twists. I don't believe that Elrond deserves Legolas and Legolas should get someone who appericates him fully. Your story has made me hate Thranduil so much. I just want Thranduil to realize his mistake in treating Legolas the way he does and to realize that he is Legolas's father. But since Legolas already has a foster father, it should make make Thranduil regret all the more for his horrible actions. I just really want Thranduil to suffer a lot. I just really hate Exc Excuse my ranting about Thranduil, I just couldn't stop. Im eagerly waiting for your next update, where do u first post your updates at Fanfiction, adultfanfiction or at your website?

*snickers* you're quite welcome, I'm happy you liked it. Again, another awesome chapter. I'm so glad the twins aren't making accusations on poor Legolas' part. That's good. Write more soon!

Oh boy. I can't wait to find out the twins and Arwen's reactions to what vile deeds Elrond has done! I must admit I like the way you write Arwen, mostly because I don't like her character in the movies (since she wasn't that important in the books.) She seems rather stubborn and vindictive. Can't wait for the next chapter, though I suppose I've no choice!

Uh oh. Dun-dun-duuun. =) I love how you portray the twins, especially Elrohir. He's such a sweety. So concerned about Legolas. What will he do when he finds out what their father did to him? Oh I shudder at the thought of it. He'll probably go off the handle. Will they be there at the mirror when Galadriel consults it and actually see the act for themselves? Will they meet sometime (hopefully not to far in the future)? I think the twins and Legolas would get along well and could beome great friends. Well, if they can get over the rift caused by their father's actions. I don't really like your Arwen very much. I can't wait to see her reaction to their father's crimes. That should be brilliant. *smiles wickedly* And yes, please do think of another trinket. Or have not all of them be lost. I just thought you handled those scenes so well. One of my favorite chapters was the one where Elrond is playing with the arrowhead. Anyways, hope to see more of the twins. I wonder if Thran will consent to the meeting being held in Lorien. Will Legolas meet Celeborn when he visits with the delegation? *is ripe with questions that need answering* More please. =9

~Stephie P.~

Great chapter. I like that the twins are trying to be compassionate towards Legolas. How far into the story are you? Have we passed the midpoint yet?

Yay! Right on schedule, another chapter! I do hope you get the next one out soon! But regarding elrond and whether legolas can forgive him, in that case.. is the fic going to stop being elrond/legolas somewhere? Legolas will hurt himself trying to forgive him you say so love between them is not going to last? I do hope that the fic will continue being elrond/legolas, but i see a lot more grief for legolas in the future because of it too.

faic, ic, missed this fic

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Oh my God, Glorfindel actually popped Elrond in the face! Wow, so much for Elven perfection, now he's got a tooth missing... Do Elves have more than two sets of teeth? hmm. I loved that last chapter so much. So now what? If Elrond goes to Mirkwood, will Legolas ever forgive him? You aren't going to tell me, are you? Ah well. Write more soon, please.

Ahhh! I so adore this story. I can't believe Elrond had to get rid of his trinkets. *pout* Was it really all of them, or did he conceal one in his pocket? I really liked the trinkets. Meanie GLorfindel. Anyways, I can't believe how affronted Elrond is about all of this. I mean, what did he honestly expect after sending that letter. But then again, the problem was, he wasn't thinking. Jealousy can do funny things to people. Oooh, so Galadriel's is going to come into play now. How nice. ^_^ Can't wait.