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person sivan325
schedule July 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
More please...

You know that more is needed here, right? :-)

I still love what I read, thank you.

Keep up the perfect work that you are doing with your fic, you do it very tensing, that I'm dying to know what will happen next.

Sivan
schedule July 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
In your other story, um, Legolas' Seat, if my memory stands, you mentioned you were preparing for a L/G pairing. Is this the form of sexual healing we'll see? Indeed, Thranduil would not be very happy to have Galadriel preside over Elrond's trial, but perhaps I misunderstood: I thought they were going to neutral ground, i.e. ? I'll have to go back to reread that part. SO much in this story, it's hard to keep up! Btw, you come up with the best curses. Sauron's shite. I laughed until, well, until I stopped. (Metaphors have never been my strong point.) Anyway, looking forward to the next chapter. Take care.
person Calenharn Elflover
schedule July 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAH!!! What is Legolas DOING?!! He's making it sound like he DELIBERATELY withheld his fire, and allowed the slaughter of warriors - far more than just the three. AAAAAH!!!
person kirameki
schedule July 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Once again you leave me hungering for more! XD Hope you don't make us wait too long. Leaving us hanging like that! =( Anyways, you're handling it beautifully. Poor Legolas though, now those people have found out about him and Malthen. The jerk tried to run. And he tried to convince us before that he cared for Legolas? *snort* Yeah, right. He really knows how to show it. I loved it when Erestor jumped him! That was so great! XD As for Legolas taking on the responcibility of Erebor... *sighs* He's too noble for his own good. I think the others made very good points. Legolas should really take note of them be cas casting them aside so quickly. Now, will Malthen recover enough to make a testimony? I hope that his relationship with Legolas won't be brought forth, but knowing Thranduil to be the spiteful ruler he is it wouldn't completely surprise me if it did happen. And there really wasn't Goblins upon the ridge? Tha new news. Anyways, I hope the next half comes soon. I'll beg if I have to. =D Pretty pretty please with elves on top! =)
person kirameki
schedule July 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ugh, I think I forgot to review! #O_O# So sorry. Anyways I loved the latest chapter. But just a bit confused.... So, that Didn't happen and was really just the mirror's vision? Or was that happening at the same time? Eh heh. Just to make sure I'm following correctly. XD Oh and I loved Rumil! He was such a sweety! *glomps him* Can't wait for the keepsake chapter. XD
~Stephie P.~
person Sivan
schedule July 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love as Rumil helped him, and care for him.

Nice update.

I still love what I read, thank you!

Keep up the perfect work that you are doing with your fic.

Sivan
person crystal
schedule July 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wah, every chapter leaves me wanting more. #__# I take it that elrond and legolas really aren't going to end up together then, i wonder what pairing you have in mind in the end? @_@ Not that i don't enjoy your ficcie regardless of pairing, but its torturing me, not knowing.. #_#; Is this series going to end in the pairing you have written for yotherther LOTR fics? @_@ Email me if you don't want to declare it, give me a hint~! @_______@
schedule July 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I was utterly thrown at the begining of this chapter, but of course at the end it all made sense. I hope that if you choose to make this scene truly happen that Legolas may finally find some comfort without artifice in another elf. Sexual comfort, I mean, not just comfort. (When I get that feeling, I want SEXUAL HEALING) Sorry, I'm a little giddy now that Aff.net is no longer on the fritz and all the wonderful authors have updated. Wonderful chapter, though. Additionally, I am excited for the final showdown. Will the Lady of the Woods be presiding o'er the trial?
person louise_oblique
schedule July 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
As always this was wonderful :) Really hope this site stays up as i love reading you fanfic. Take care honey

huggs
louise
person Waters Reflection
schedule July 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for updating. I love the fact that you are so dependable and that i know you wiinisinish this story unlike some authors who just abandoned their stories and their readers. This is really stupid, superfluous, and innane but i like the way you describe Legolas's apperance because that physically marks me as being unique and special and its the physical mansifestation of his bond w/ Tawar. Plus the fact that his physical apperance shows the beauty and intergrity of soul is very satisfying. Im so glad you are going to make Thranduil suffer, that he gets exactly what he deserves. Arwen's personality fits the waviewview her. Im glad u did not make her too sweet and generous because that be too unrealistic. I think that she would act a little like a spoiled child because she is the eveningstar and daddy's little girl etc. Right now, I really don't like Arwen but that might change as the story progresses. Your such an awesome writer, im so jealous of your writing skills. But anyways please update soon.