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by narcolinde

person Kryspen
schedule August 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Lovely and wonderful as always! I adore your writing! I must say that as much as I rejoice the fact that Erestor is introducing Legolas to the deeper, more caring and loving aspects of physical love, Erestor already has two bonded mates. I'm still holding out for Glorfindel ^_^ if they ever meet face to face....
schedule August 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Because when I get this feeling, I want, sexual healing. LOL, glad to see Legolas enjoying himself. I was excited when I started reading chapter 73, thinking that 74 would have the obligatory sex promised in 73, only to find you're making me wait until chapter 75. To echo Legolas' comment to Erestor, "You cheated!" Ah well, I guess that's just that much more time for Legolas to enjoy himself.
person sivan325
schedule August 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So... until then, Erestor will keep him safe, and they will be lovers?

What about Elrond?

The chapter was full on joy, that showed between them, I believe that Legolas loves his company.

And yet, I need more.

I still love what I read, thank you!

Keep up the perfect work that you are doing with your fic.

Sivan
person Thalionwen
schedule August 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I have been following your magnificent epic since I first came across it at Galadhrim and to say I am n ofn of your storytelling style would be an understatement!! There is so much that has left its indelible print in my thoughts, that I could not possibly name all, though perhaps the one thing above all for me is your concept of Tawar and of the incredible bond it shares with Legolas...Thank you for gracing us with such an extraordinary tale!
person kirameki
schedule August 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, that was a delicious chapter! I was so happy to see you updated. This is my favorite story at the moment. XD Nice touch with the flower and musing on elven "glows". Erestor is so naughty. But I like how he treats Legolas. It is so sad that he's never had anyone treat him like that before. And being so overwhelmingly happy to get even a small portion of the advisor's heart. So sad, bitterweet. *huggles Legolas*. Heh heh. Seriously though, wonderful chapter. Looking forward to the trial resuming. XD
person Jaylen
schedule August 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Erobey,

I love your story!! I have been reading it from the very start and it just gets better and better. Some of the scenes are very graphic, but they serve to make us understand why Legolas behaves the way he does. The emotions in this are running very high!! You do a wonderful job making us visualize the characters and settings. I have been brought to tears on more than one occasion reading this story. The depth of the characters is fabulous! I hope Legolas ends up with Erestor, but if not I am sure he will be much more well adjusted sel self-confident for having known him. It makes me feel so good watching Legolas learn to love himself, not something that will come easy for him. I look forward to the heartache that Thranduil will feel (hopefully) when he realizes the wonderful son he threw away. Will he ever get him back? Can the gap be bridged? The king is very proud and arrogant, can he admit his mistakes? I eagerly look forward to the rest of your story. It is always the highlight of my evening to find your story updated.
Thank You so much for sharing your stories with us.
Jaylen
person Sivan
schedule August 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
O.k. to be not confused here: Did Legolas feels somet for for Erestor, or he wants to punish Elrond, and that's why he made love to him?

Sivan
person kirameki
schedule August 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I come back from vacation to two brand new chapters! I'm overjoyed to say the least! Erestor is a sweetie. heh heh. I can't believe they did that on the path in plain sight. It even had me blushing! I can't wait to learn more. They will have to bring to light the fact that Malthen tried to runy bey before the trial, won't they? I mean it's definitely suspicsious. Anyways, I'm still on the edge of my seat. I love the healer. She's great. Whenever I think of her I picture my mom for some reason.... >_> Anyways. It's good to be back. ~Stephie P.
person crystal
schedule August 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ah, the woes of legolas.. *sigh* Its always good to see another chapter, keep writing!
person Ash
schedule July 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nooo!!! Poor Legolas still blames himself! Another awesome chapter, and I loved the part where Legolas protected Fearfaron from Thranduil, and WOW, Erestor kicked some major ass too. YAY!!!