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by narcolinde

person Shelly
schedule November 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
HA! I do love Elrond dearly, but not in this story. He deserved that. Hmm Glorfindel needs someone. I volunteer! *laugh* You are doing an awesome job with this.

Stupid ff.net!
person Ash
schedule November 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sorry, sorry, sorry! I know I haven't reviewed in a dog's age. I've been having alot of trouble logging on to aff.net.

This is such a kick-ass fic! (I know that sounded childish, I couldn't help it. But it's great!!)

Just tell me something; did you intend this to eventually become a Legolas/Erestor fic? Or was it kinda... go with the flow? I couldn't care less, it's awesome!!

BTW, do you have a livejournal or anything? Just wondering

~Ash
person Thalionwen
schedule November 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sweet Eru, Erobey!. Chapter 80 was absolutely oustanding!!!!. What an incredible psychological and emotional journey...and how very gratifying to see Legolas finally begin the process to true healing!. Chapter 81 has also left me speechless. I can sense Elrond's desperation as the lies, desires and delusions are now in danger of toppling all around him. You are MASTL meL meldiramin...
person uppacrick
schedule November 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi, Just wanted to weigh in and let you know how much I am enjoying your story. When I first found it, I could barely drag myself away from reading it to sleep and go to work -- I was hooked! I truly admire your ability for description and the deep emotional complexity you bring to your characters. I can only imagine how much work it takes to bring this to fruition. But please know that your effort is much appreciated. Looking forward to future chapters...
person Kryspen
schedule November 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE the twins... They were not easily misled by Elrond's panicked misdirection. I really enjoy their, and Glorfindel's, calm common sense and wisdom that guides their decision making and actions..
wha what did I read in one of the review responses...? "And unfortunately the finale is rather traumatic..." *GASP* Was this a 'possible' ending? An ending with more stuff happening after the traumatic stuff? Some comfort stuff, justice and closure for Legolas' long suffering at the hands of utterly loathsome and despicable characters... argh!

^_^ Kryspen
person Shelly aka ivorybrowneyes @ ff.net
schedule November 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOOOOO! I hope Orophin and Erestor's other mate allow Legolas into their relationship(s)! Elrond is a meanie.

You rock!
person BK
schedule November 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for this beautiful story. It is totally incredible.
person sarah
schedule October 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hello,

really love this chapter! So important to the story. Without these chapters with Erestor, Legolas would have no real healing. These things have to be brought out and taken care of. The heart's healing is just as important if not more so then solving what went on Erebor. I cannot tell you how much I appreciate the effort you've put into these chapters to give Legolas' some heart ease. These chapters show many important things like talking does help if our confidences are given to the right person. The tendency is to bury these things inside and feel ashamed. They also show that one doesn't need a degree to help someone, one needs love for that person.
Thank you so much for patiently crafting a wonderful story instead of rushing to the end. A good story takes from the writer and is given our patience and care and yours shows that wonderful quality of having an author who will give the words the care and time they need. Your story has helped me see myself and aided me in my life.
When Feud is completed these chapters with Erestor will shine and help show Feud as the masterpiece it truly is.
Thank you!
Sarah
schedule October 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
"Valar! I want to come!"

That was great! Wonderful chapter. I'm pacified that Legolas was happy for a while. Do you mean that you had originally intended to let Elrond have Legolas?!? Oh my, I'm rather glad you are a sinner, then.


Morier
person Calenharn Elflover
schedule October 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Eighty chapters and still going strong?!! Still writing just as marvelously?! Still binding us in thrall, compelling us to read your words?!

*shakes head in admiration*

Poor broken, depraved Legolas. The horror of it - that he would actually have submitted under the chastisement, if Fearfaron hot iot intervened. That was entirely unexpected. *shudders*

Wonderful compassionate Erestor.

But oh, I do not like the implied threat ... that this chapter was the end of bliss for Legolas (Bliss?! Emotional torment!) for quite some time. Ai.