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Oh dear! I'm afraid you put us all to shame... It's amazing. I have to say I've never been as devoted to fanfiction before, until now when an update gives my life meaning. (I'm ashamed to admit it but u've got me hooked) You have genuine, flawed and loveable characters. you make me feel complete anguish on Legolas' behalf. So please I beg you update soon! And even if you introduce more horrors for L, (especially with reencountering Elrond) can u please end happily and let him gain a family and recognition. Please, please, please. I hate those halfhearted happy endings when nothing is properly concluded (and let's not get me stated on sad endings - i almost cry at the thought) No! You must make it end happily - for me, your humble reader 'cause i'm afraid my sanity might depend on it. It would be great if you could introduce an Elrond, Erestor Legolas love triangle thing, with elrond discovering he's genuinely in love, amd a massive show down in public. Hehe. And I wonder what Erestor's bond-mates will make of L. Maybe you could have them meet in some seriously incriminating circumstances where Legolas doesn't know who they are and vice versa and they let something slip about Elrond. Hmmmm....At the relationship gets all convoluted. But please let them accept him in the end. Oh ignore me - i'm such a back-seat writer - I shld leave it to u, maestro. Anyway keep up the good work...
Lol Shifty xxx
ps Can u please let Meril meet some sticky fate (preferable with Thrabduil realising she's evil) b/c I really don't like her... Oh, and Elrond too. If he hurts Lego again... Make him suffer! mwahahahaha

Awww... *sniff* that was so beautiful. Elf smut and cuddly comfort talk afterwards, my favourite combination :)

Looks like I'm # 5000!

I'm hooked on your story. I love the way you combine vivid detail, politcal intreague and personal conflicts into a smooth read.
Letting Legolas get to know his half-siblings was wonderful. Thank you for providing much enjoyment.

Another heart wrenching chapter! I can't wait to see how you resolve this. Elrond is obviously in love with Legolas now and now Legolas has bonded with Erestor. This is fantastic fanfic, some of the best. I tune in weekly to see what else you have wrought. Delicious! Keep writing.

OOH! It is sadly going to pull that family apart, but it's Elrond's fault. I have to say I love Erestor here! And those poor twins...they need some loving...*raises hand* Awesome as usual!

Thank you again for your story. You are better than any therapy session out there.
Cesca

erobey!

Your psychological drama/angst is some of the BEST out there. The conversations back and forth between the twins and their father were delightfully intense, soul-searching, deep and revealing. Love it!

Yay!! Some honesty out of the old bat!!! And man oh man, that was the best line ever, about 'were you fucking a concept or an elf?' - it soooo cut to the heart of Elrond's attempts at avoiding the cruelty against Legolas!! Beautiful chapter (as always, with your writing, actually!) I keep longing for the twins to meet my favorite archer.... I hope that's in store for them someday! Their insight is fascinating - how you have shown them learning the truth through all of Elrond's subterfuge - and I think they're assessments of future situations would be fun, like that of the Thranduil/Meril/Leggy relationships...

Thanks again for entertaining me so well!!

Erobey, meldis... I was literaly moved to tears by this last chapter. What sorrow! What guilt!. And what will be found when the true cause, the very *core* of Elrond's sundered heart is exposed?... I applaud you for not taking the easy way out and making the Lord of Imladris into a 'cut-and-dry-villain'. Instead, you present a complex and tortured soul, a character that is not so easy to hate ( thus the twin's dilemma... ). I will follow this amazing story until the very end!!

As always totally WOW! Fantastic, well done

huggs
louise