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for One Night

by eviltwin737

person vestalvagrant
schedule July 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Just read the Orli and Dom companion pieces for the first time. Coz they're my fave guys, oh yes. Glad you paired them together!
person Anon
schedule July 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I think my fav pairing in this whole thing is Billy/Sean.

Then again, I haven't read the Dom/Orli companion.

*sighs*
person nis-nis
schedule July 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh god, can I print this whole fic and wrap it up and then send it to myself so I get it on my birthday so I can just drool at it all?
person nis
schedule July 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh god, my last review for this.

Thank you thank you thank you

I loved it.

Loved it sooooo much I can't even begin to talk about all of the aspects of it. It's just so beautifully sad and wonderful at the same time, everybody goes through these cycles of both. Oi. I'm so jealous!
person The new Mrs. Evil
schedule June 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I just read over this again.....oh man! It's wonderful.
person Aja
schedule June 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH. ~cough~ Sorry.. Harry and Karl.. PLEASE tell me they're going to get together in the next part. They HAVE to. It's like an old charter or something.

~bats lashes atcha~ I need my hot Harry/Karl seks fix. As for everyone else... Sean & Billy - ~ROWR~ Dom'n'Orli - Hot as hell Vigs & Lij - Will they or won't they?

Brilliant my darlin'... XX
person sonja
schedule June 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Loverly way to begin my day. That and the feckin "Fookin Kilt" piccie.

You twins will be the death o'me.

Love, tea & bickies,
Sonja
person Nis...
schedule May 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god. OH MY GOD!!!! This existed and you didn't tell me...oh hey Nisi, check out my story, it's frickin genius and I think you'll pant and cheer and be incredibly jealous when you read. Bec I a I am. What an amazing idea. It's so brilliantly written too.....the way everything flashes back and forth, the people involved and the depth of each situation! All in the first chapter no less!!!

*Is trying like hell to write a coherent review*

There's gonna be tons more right? Why am I thinking that Vig and Lij and Dom and Orli are gonna do the old switcheroo. I'm so predictable. Buuuuut, you know how I am with those two...always have to be together in some way!

And Karl and Harry! YAAAAYYYY!

So, are they all going to get together in some way (I mean that innocently of course!) Are you going to sell warm wrinkly billy on the gsc store? Am I going to die from reading this~ YES!!!
person vestalvagrant
schedule May 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh I can't wait for more of this. This is very very good dot com.

Most sensual highlights:


Their hands reach across the table and link together, Sean's thumb moving over the ridges of Billy'uckluckles.


"'Cause it'd be kind of silly to ask *after* doing this." Orli puts the glass down and takes Dom into his arms. He lowers his head and his lips are barely touching Dom's when he asks, "is this okay or not?"

*shiver*
person eviltwin737
schedule May 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hehe, no hun, ah'm not trying to kill ye. *mwah*
You'll have tae wait a bit for the next part thoo.. Got a bit of work tae dae taemorrow..
*it's catching*
I LOVE SCOTCH BILLY! YAY!
And we all love Shelleybeanz...she's so entertaining it's unreal.
Bleh.
Anyways... laters *snugs*
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