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for Destiny's Arrow

by diablerouge

person Rose Red
schedule June 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yes! This Chapter is just everything that is good about this story - the heat between the two of them, and all the while in character and so clear. One of the good things about your Legolas is that little bit of aristocratic attitude, and it makes the seduction that much more interesting.
And then you let them get sooooo close and then they have to go and have dinner. ;) Well, looking forward to the next installment.
person Rose Red
schedule May 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*obeys the request for reviews*

These early chapters really are intriguing, the way you're writing around the idea of Legolas/Arwen before actually telling us what happened. And I love Aragorn's perspective on things. It's got to be tough for Arwen to choose between these two. :))~~

Good stuff, keep going!
person maskedlogician
schedule May 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
A formidable work indeed. A deft, engaging plot, characters which actually seemed to be in character, and, best of all, the whole lot was presented in a manner comfortably reminiscent of Tolkien, and yet pleasingly original. Kudos.

Sure do wish it were finished...
person jess
schedule May 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I can't wate to see where this is going. Please continue.
person Anchovyeater
schedule May 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OMG! This is THE best fan fiction that I have ever read! I wish I could write a review worthy of your fantastic writing. I do hope you continue this story. It is sooooo well written and I am enjoying it to no end! PLEASE continue!
person Rose Red
schedule May 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yay!
I'm glad to see this fic is back somewhere - and even more glad that it's going to be updated soon! I was afraid you weren't coming back. :) There is noone else acceptable to write Legolas/Arwen/Aragorn. It's an AU pairing but you've worked it so nicely with canonical elements. Can't wait to see what happens.
person Quarble
schedule May 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
What? Could it beomeoomeone with a concept of spelling and grammar? Impossible! After reading bushels of lousy fanfics, this alone is an accomplishment, but to be a good writer to boot is utterlyeardeard of! Congratulations, you have just made my week in a single chapter! I can't wait for the next update :o)