rate_review Reviews

i really enjoyed your story... it was great one of the better ones i have read, but i think legolas and arwen should have been together in the end.

Strangely, I find myself dissatisfied at how Legolas and Arwen let themselves off the hook for being parents. It does not feel right that they would act like their relationship was just about them when they had a child's well-being to think of.

Aragorn is a fool in this story. One, not bothering to explore her past. Two, accepting Gandalf's advice without knowing more.

Love might be an emotional mandate when it comes, but companionship is a choice. Arwen chose poorly, so did Aragorn.

I think the story is well told. The outcomes are definitely unsettling, but I know people in real life make more twisted choices and these for less reason than destiny.

Well done story teller, well done.

Great job, shows a another side of Legolas and Eowyn. Can talk to me anytime on AIM

Hey Sarah, darling.

As you fully well know, I adore trine and thought I'd post a small comment on here to make you feel happy and giddy from the amount of reviews you have, (goodness you're popular :P ) Keep writing and I eagerly await the next installment.

Anita

Whooooooooohoooooooooooo! Love it! I hope the spell works!

What an AU you are writing here. A black haired Legolas who helps a witch Eowyn perform spells to trick Aragorn. More please.

It was quite common (all over the world) in the olden days for cousins to marry. It was usually arranged too. Heck, where I live they past a law just a few years ago that you cannot marry your second cousin. That caused a great uproar with the rednecks in the area. LOL! I wonder if the state song here is ‘Dueling Banjos’? It probably is! LOL!

Anyhoooooooo, do write this scene! I enjoy your writing so and I know it will be fantastic as always!

Gosh! Nice backstory on some of the major characters. How come this Legolas has black hair? That's definitely a new one on me. I am interested in seeing where this story will go.

Goodness! That was oh, so good and I crave desperately for more! WOW!

I need more of your fic! And more elves too! I like that part with Grima and Theodred arriving at the right moment, though I think his relationship with Eowyn a little... weird.