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person Grey
schedule October 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm your 666th hit for this hilarious... and frightening... bit of literature. I can't believe I read the whole thing, I need to drink some cough medicine now.
person Julia
schedule September 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
My boyfriend just crawled in becauase I was laughing so loud that he woke up from it. That much for the "great s, lo, love it, rofl" bit.

I'm usually a bit apprehensive when people write more harsh critics / MST´s than fiction because I've seen it verge on the "I flame for the fun of it" all to often. But this... it's a great solution, because the poor author doesn`t have to read it, your points are good, you don´t bash the writer herself as far as I can see, and it's funny as hell.

So thanks for a great read, and I'll try to laugh not quite so loud.

(will be difficult, though)
person Julia
schedule September 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oouch... firstly my stomach hurts from the supressed laughter, secondly I dared myself to read the original. Ouch ouch oooow. I´m deeply deeply impressed that you held yourself back with your review. (Figures that you´re the "mean people" despite the valiant self restraint.)
Very very very good MST, and deserved, and it takes into consideration the age and, errrm, mental state of the writer. Last has rarity value.
If I started quoting the parts I liked best I would end up repeating 80% of your MST.
(Sorry for the double posting)
person Kira
schedule May 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hello!
Oh.. No mpleaplease... Oops... I know. It's not your fault, but Alyssa-orwhatishername's...
Usually I avoid bad fics... But I like your MSTs... Oh, a big dilemma here, see? Really, there were times, when I was only laughing insane... then I realised, she wrote it for herself AND publicated it AND she didn't take the criticism well...
I'm lucky, because I only read it in an MST. I'd not read it without Viggo's or Craig's comments... *bows* thanks for life-saving MTS-writing!
Bye!
person Claire
schedule May 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear lord! I've only just discovered this one!..........Anyone got an asprin?
person frodo\'s boy
schedule May 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*still tries to get up after rofl*

can't believe frodos girl is real - doesn't matter anyway

please: more chappies!
person opheliablue
schedule May 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh god. Oh my freaking god.

I don't even believe in god.

But I believe in this.

Hope you're still reading. That was so cheezy!

You are one sarcastic girl! *i'm getting to know the different ones here, it's a group of you guys, right* I love how you bash them for their english, and how you actually give your MSTer's characterization.

Is that spelled right? See, this is why I don't write fanfics! B/c I know my faults!!!

And if I did, I'd live in fear of you!
person Captain Obvious
schedule May 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Replying to the review above:
Ya, there is, like, a group of us, ya?
We have a site and everything, ya?
We're all British and gay (except for the aussie and the american) and all think we're the most amazing things to grace the face of the earth. Apparently.
Please go check out our site! It has a toon and everything.. *runs off laughing*
www.freewebs.com/gayshaggingcats

Oh, and shelley? If you go there and post flames in our guestbook...we might MST them. We MST anything that moves as long as it makes us laugh enough. *big wide grin*
Much pash,
Captain Obviously, like, so gay.. xx
person SugaryLime
schedule May 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh. . I had hopes for some Ewan Seks. ::POUT:: We need some Scot-on-Scot Kilty Fun. . .

<3 SugaryLime
person So Sugary Lime
schedule May 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Anywho. . .
I just went and reviewed the original too. Only I wasn't nice . . .LOL.

Don't you all just love how we're treating this as our own personal MST message board? I do. And BTW, I'm going to have the guys do commentary on her Fanfiction.net bio. . .I think that would be funny. Unless you wanna do it, Skydi . . . .

Cheers,
So Sugary Lime.