rate_review Reviews

HI!!! I was so very happy when i saw the newest chapter of this wonderful story!! I really love your fics specially this one-- so i hope your muse keeps inspiring you 'cause i really wanna see the end of The dark star of Gondolin. i wonder if there will be any baybies in the future of our wonderful pair, that would be a very happy ending!!

I surtenly hope this story won´t end here.
please update soon.

Here is my beef with the story so far. As Glorfindel's courtesan, Durel cannot chart his own destiny in life. He is basicly a slave. He is not even free to love any but Glorfindel. But Glorfindel could have granted him a sort of freedom by not treating him like a courtesan. But he didn't. He claimed Durel as his own-- the way he had Durel sleep in his bed every night. And when he found Durel and the king together, instead of thinking to himself "Well, maybe Durel has found love. I love him, but he is not my property, he is free to love whome he will", he could only think of himself and his own wounded heart. The way he treated Durel is sick and I hate him. I think you should rework the last chapter unless you mean for us to hate Glorfindel.

Wow! this is really good who I do hope you will continue it I am dying to know the outcome.

Please Update more than once a month. It's very difficult to get into a story when it's dragged out in this infernal manner.

I do love this story.. please more my poor poor Erestor..

ah wonderful!!! you must continue!