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for The Dark Star of Gondolin

by Lynsey

person Jannet
schedule December 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Owww, please continue writing this and the other stories you have...they are amazing and I really want to know what happens, please, please, please???. I think i saw one of your stories on fanfiction, but no matter which place you post, just write more please :)
person balrog
schedule October 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is getting quite good. I feel for Durel. He needs some happiness in his life and I think Glorfindel will be there for him through it all. Nice chapter.
schedule October 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh! That last bit was so sweet! Please, please I hope the babe lives too--so Erestor has someone to live for when Glorfindel dies!

:sniffles:
person Kalima
schedule September 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I've always avoided the hermaphrodite stories, but I remembered that you are a skilled writer.

Although I hate to think an elf society could be so cruel, certainly your story is intriguing and so well written that I am addicted. I've never read a story about a courtesan-hero before and am surprised I could be so sympathetic to one who can be manipulative as well as sympathetic. Your characters are most believable, exept for the fact that elves are supposed to be so noble. (We'll have to assume that Tolkien was handed an very whitewashed version of them.)

I am touched that you (and others) would write for my pleasure for no monetary return. Thank you. I hope you aren't too busy to update.
person balrog
schedule August 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I now see the love between these two is going to be precious. Their love is beautiful. Thanks.
person balrog
schedule August 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor Durel. That Maelgin I never liked. He was always trouble. As for Turgon, he's no better. Nice job.
person balrog
schedule July 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love the way this story flows. It's amazing how you wrote Durel so sensual.
schedule May 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love the way you write such believable characters. I would love it more if you were to update, though! :-)

Yes, I've been going through my lists of stories I keep an eye on :grin:
schedule August 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow. I love this story... it's so moving. Turgon's kinda pissing me off though... ok he is alot... ;P but I hope you are planning on continuing.... it's really really really well written!
schedule June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow ... Please write more.