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for Another’s Guilt

by PattyWilliams

schedule May 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
really good story! Love the plot line, Legolas' personality is absolutely adorable, and Orophin is a deep OC, which is getting hard to find lately.
I was slow at times, but it kept my ADOS-influenced attention. (Attention deficit- ooh shiny!)
I can't wait for the 'next/final chapter'!!
~Kai
person bonksie
schedule June 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh wow.
i love this please continue.
is Legolas pregnant?
please continue soon I cant wait!
schedule April 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Do you know how long I've been waiting for you to complete this story lady? >:( It's about time! Please don't keep your loyal fans waiting too long again. :( I watch ofelvesandmen.com, as well as was it melethryn and don't hear anything from you. :(
person Cay
schedule February 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a really good story and I'm really hoping for an update! Please keep the words flowing.
person HHS
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Interesting that they both had the same dream.
person HHS
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well,it seems that as humans,they already jumped to the wrong conclusions.They are risking war with the elves.Okay,isn't Aragorn a descendant of Elros?
person SplitPersona
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story sounds interesting. I like how you have made it AU and yet you have the characters behiving appropriately within the ocnfines of said AU. Poor 'Lass. Don't hurt him too badly. Then you won't be able to hurt him more later. I can't wait to see where you go with this story. It does seem like it could be a very good one. Maybe you might want to post in on the general forum instead of the 'male/male' section because I have noticed that stories seem to have less plublicity when an author does that. Good job though.
person Lysan
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh no! Poor Legolas! While I can understand the anxiety of the men, that's a rather unfair and quick judgement on their part. I hope they don't regret their hasty actions! Looking forward to seeing how this develops.