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for Tears of the Valar.

by Jodiodi

person Yue
schedule December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It's over!! It's finally over! This has definitely been action packed from middle to end. I LOVE YOU!!!! Lastro-butt is finally over thrown. I kinda like his ending and I kinda wished for more. Its scary to know that he can get out sometime in the future w/ some help and knowing he's growing crazier by the day... *shivers*.

Poor Legolas and Alex. THEY COULD HAVE HAD A BABY!!! That great dream and miracle was w/in their grasp and it was taken away just like that. I really feel sorry for Legolas. He must have been so happy, he was goin to be a dad! That Lastro-bastard.

There was one thing that really jumped at me as I read the last few chapters. Alex's blood was all over Orophin's arm when he was carrying her out to safety but I remember that Alex's blood is highly acidic and would eat away anything that it came in contact w/. Well, I don't really care anymore now. That sceen was a very powerful image and I think this story was great on how it turned out. THANK YOU for everything. I hope to read more from you.
person Yue
schedule November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
HOLY SHIT! Its been too long since i got a chance to read ur story, and man am i missing a lot. I have to say, u have a lot of guts killing off an elf (can't remember her name, sorry). I really like her too. i feel sorry for her boyfriend ( u can tell its been too long since i don't even remember ppl's names.) Well, i definitely got my wish and theres a lot of action goin on. Everything has gone to the shit house and everyones scatered. Lastro-butts still alive and has Erestor prisoner. Sorry about not reviewing ur story in such a long time. Life's been hectic and school is kicking my butt. Definitely will find a chance to finish reading ur story and write a better review. Keep it up! Ur awesome.