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WTF was in Gildor to make him behave like that? I am intrigued by this Phoenix and the raw meat and childlike disposition. What will Elrond do to Gildor now. More story please.

Gildor's not going to get away that easy right?He made that choice and what happened in the past is no excuse for him to hurt others.

Are you going to update anytime soon at this site?

What a concept! More story please.

So Erestor has the ability to be re-born.Cool.Anyway,I still hope that justice will be done.

I am glad that Erestor is back but it is sad at the same time because all those who knew him would still have to mourn him, in a way. I am eager to see how the education of Erestor will go! Wonderful chapter, hon!
Hugs,
Maelle.

A great beginning of what surely will become a great story. I am looking forward to the next chapters. Besides being a product of your writing talent the story plot seems really original.

Yours, Midnight

"Who am I?" "WHO AM I?" How could you? Erestor has lost his memory. Just when you redeem your self with updating quickly and sending out chapter five for Cinderestor (which I have already left my opinion on that fic) you end with "WHO AM I?" Your not making me happy. You wouldn't like me when I am not happy. For I possess the power of the flame 0_~ The ability to criticize good fics about grammer, word choice, and syntax and no matter how perfect you think it is I have the ability to find errors. Anyway update soon and no more cliffhangers like that one ^_^

So Erestor has a complete re-birth including no memory of his previous life.As for the accused elves,it will be in their best interest to cooperate with Glorfindel before he does anything drastic.

omg!!! this is great! more please more more more! this is a great story you leave off at the perfect moments leaveing us totally on edge for what happens next!!! i cant wait till you get another chapter up!