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January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Like how you have started out this story and how you have humbled the haughty one! Now lets see him court her the proper way, sounds like he already has lost his heart to her and she to him! Love this! Please update soon!
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January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOWEE!! What a fun story! I love the way the wardens are interpreting Haldir's latest behavior. I wish she had been around to teach many of the males I have known in my life. More story please.
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January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*snickers* I like how the guys changed their ways and the reaction of the elleths. Lol. Please update!!
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January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg omg omg write more please this was such a cute chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! omg omg omg
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January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG...........OMG.................OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! this was another GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! chapter I think it is my favorite so far.... PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE update sooooooooooooon, I can't wait to see what happens.... oooooooooooooo I'm so excited to see what happens.... ooooooooooooo I can't wait!!!!!!!! hurry hurry hurry!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I found myself almost tearing up at her painful existence. This is a wonderful story
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January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I thought it was very cute. I like Haldir once he realized what he did. ^_^ Please update!!
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January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!!!!!!!! that was a great chapter!!!!! Haldir is so going to beat the ever loving crap out of that merchant and if he doesnt well he needs to. That was the sweetest thing ever what he did for her, though I am a little confused were they in her talan or his? Or did somewhere along the way they switched to his and I just missed it? Oh well it was GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I am so going to be checking everyday to see if you have updated again so dont keep me waiting to long.....
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January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoy your story. The characters are well thought out and your OC is well made! the story so far has a good plot and is well paced. can not wait for the next chapter!
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January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
no dont change a thing I think this is GREAT just the way you have it and I am on the edge of my seat waiting for your next update so pleeeeeeeeeeeeease update soon. Oh and if I may make a suggestion, for like dramatic conflict or something possibly make like Carha faint from lack of food you know to tug at Haldir's heart strings, maybe even make her on the verge of death, because she works to hard for money now that shes not working for him and even though she sells stuff in market its not enough to sustain her.