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for I'd Give Up Forever To Touch You

by Arden

person Anon
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WHY!? WHY!? WHY!? you need to write more, you cant just leave it like that!!!!!!!!!! I need to know what happens!!!!!!!!!!! OOOO I know maybe Haldir will go back to the borders and then there will be an attack and because he is so upset and not himself he will get seriously hurt and maybe even be close to death and when he is brought back to the woods Cahra will see him and right before Haldir loses conciousness he whispers to her 'I Love you'
person MarzBar
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
How can we shoot you when we don't know where you are? How stupid is Haldir anyway? It's way past time he asked permission to court her properly. Maybe Galadriel could intercede on his behalf to help convince his "wash maid" that he wasn't being lustful, just loving. More story please you evil cliffie writer.
person HHS
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ARGH!!What is Haldir afraid of?!
person Naira
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Whaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa you can't be mean to Haldir

He was being so sweeeeet -huggles him- You can hold me at night if you wish huh huh? -giggles-

Alright alright, back to serious, I hope you update again soon and I love the way you write the story, it's not so much predictable
person Lena Hart
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
arg! a cliffy please write more more more!!!
person Jayn
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awww! *Gives Haldir cookies* I hope things will get better!! *Gives you cookies too* Please update!!
person sugarplum
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!! hate cliffhangers, please tell us that she feels the same about him and that she is wanting to take their relationship to a higher level? I think its sweet that he can't bear to be without her and spends the night with her just watching her or holding her! Update soon! and no more cliffhangers, my life can't take anymore drama now!
person NADA
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ok, where did the review I had go? anyway, continue this soon, hate to see her disapointed, forgive him and love him!
person cowsgirl
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh,pretty please update! Just can't wait any longer! Please finally give her what she longs for HIM!!!!!
person Mesopotamia
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you updated! another wonderful chapter! I like the relationship between them. Again, very Jane-Eyre-esque and cute! I really am enjoying this! No complaints!