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for I'd Give Up Forever To Touch You

by Arden

person dragonfly
schedule February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story is so amazing I have tubble expressing myself.

~Dragonfly~
person Minerva Ann McGonagall (too lazy to sign in)
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ch 10 - oh this was a cute ending! I want to hear about Glorfindel or Erestor! That is what I want to hear about!
person MarzBar
schedule February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much for the wonderful story. I'm glad that her cursing is as good as her domestic talents. She'll need the cursing to deal with Haldir, Haldir's brothers and a little boy.
person HHS
schedule February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was a funny labor scene!
person angelsfyre1
schedule February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved the story!! The characters were well done. i really liked your OC and the way she helped Haldir see the light.. and made sewing maniacs out of his patrol LOL I would be very interested in reading any new story you come up with in the future. you have a nice blend of serious and fun to your story which makes it fun to read. i hate that this story has ended! thank you for sharing it with us!!
person sugarplum
schedule February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Bravo! and excellent ending! Had to laugh at him trying to get dressed and all when she went into labor and she had to help him with it!!!! just like a kid. Anyway great story and hope you do more. Like your style of writing and I think that whatever charcter you choose next will be just as great!
person HHS
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I would really love to see Haldir do that.
person MarzBar
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What a funny binding they had! At least, it's the silliest one I have read about. I look forward to the next/last chapter.
person sugarplum
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh I do hope that your are not done with this yet!!!! Loved how you got them together and that they both know that there will never be another for either one of them! Please update and soon!
person Anne
schedule January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm not usually a big Haldir fan (more of a Rivendell elf fan myself) But this story has captivated me since its beginning chapter. It's well-written, nicely worded and, as I am a natural editor/writer in desperate need to something to write only a few spelling errors - all of which I've made until I learned the proper wayy :) Excellent work and I look forward with eager eyes to seeing where you take this tale.