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by Ennorwen

person Ennorwen
schedule January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thanks to all who reviewed this maiden effort! outlawblue, would you please be so kind as to offer your suggestions for improvement? Or, should I email you personally on this? New to this world and don't know how best to communicate. Thanks.
person sugarplum
schedule January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What a story! didn't care for the spanking, but what ever floats your boat! but whew!!!!
person outlawblue
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I liked it! With some extra work it could be unbelievably hot!
person Anon
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hot one shot, Its not often you see het fanfiction in this section usually its all slash, i like this dominant haldir ;)