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January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Too short to know if I like it or not, but you said you intend to keep to canon. So I thought to point out that elves called Gandalf Mithrandir and there should not be any halflings so far west in Lindon during Second Age, if they were around at all, then east of Misty Mountains. How would Glorfindel know of the existence of Gil-Galad's kingdom in Lindon anyway when his last memory is his death?
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January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for your comment! Concerning Glorfindel’s name for Gandalf. Well, I am from Yorkshire, and we always sit down in the evening to eat ‘tea,’ but that doesn’t mean I can’t go out for ‘dinner.’ As for the halfling – I did already ask for forgiveness if I made any ‘small’ mistakes *g* And with respect to your last point there, I would like to draw your attention to the sentence: “He didn’t know where he was going […]” which didn’t strike me as being particularly ambiguous.
Cheers,
Pip :)
Cheers,
Pip :)