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for A Warrior's Destiny

by pip

person Angelfire
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh poor Erestor, I hope Glorfindel see that Erestor was lieing and that he does love him
person Angelfire
schedule January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
no no no poor Erestor...... please don't let Glorfindel be mad.... more more more please
person Kalima
schedule January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
All right, I don't get it. Glorfindel couldn't have travelled withthese guys all this time and mistaken what Erestor looks and sounds like. Is Erestor gifted the power of changing his appearance and voice? Does Elrond know of the deception. Is it that everyone else knows Glordindel is Erestor's lover but Glorfindel doesn't? And no one knows that Glorfindel is being deceived??

What is going on??
person Kalima
schedule January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like your story, first of all. I appreciate work that helps fill in from the Silmarillion to the LOTR times.

I was confused when you switched to a flashback. It didn't make sense sat the time (why there?) and I percieved no message that you were skipping back to the past. Maybe using a date to indicate the leap backward? Maybe a different script? I don't know . . . something.

Anyway, I will read on. Thanks for writing.
person Caethien
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am still enjoying your story! And thank you for the flashback. It made me smile. Keep writing and I'll keep reading!
person zhie
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am really enjoying this story. The last chapter was especially wonderful, with equating the saving of books with their histories and all that is contained within their pages to the saving of lives in a way. Looking forward to more soon!
person Jayn
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like the story so far! I've always been facinated with Glorfindel's character, so I can't wait to read more! Please update soon!
person lissie
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please continue this, I love glorfindel/erestor fic! i like the beginning because usually they are already together in rivendell and this is so different, please write more!!!
person Anduril_Flame
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I don't read Glorfindel/Erestor usually, but I decided to give this a try, hoping to finding good fiction about everybody's favorite balrog slayer. I hope you will write more of this, it is so hard to find good stories with this pairing, and this first chapter already shows that you haven't fallen to the same boring old fanon characterisation. More please!
person Caethien
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good start, but it's a pity you flew through the ealier part of the Second Age so quickly. I was looking forward to reading what Gil-galad thought of the newly returned Glorfindel. Well, maybe you'll have Gil-galad visit Imladris or something (please?). I'll keep reading!