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for Sleeping Erestor

by AmberKelly

person chaotic_binky
schedule November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Maelle I hope you are going to finish this - it is a lovely story so far. pretty please with strawberries on top? tx binky x
person HHS
schedule February 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow.I just hope that they will come back to civilization eventually.
person zenah
schedule February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ooooooooh, i am waiting excitidly at the next chapter which you will update soon, right?..........*cough* anyway, i loved this chapter, i liked the naughty part veeeeeeeeeeery much and i can just imagen how the sexscene will be *whisteling* wow!!!

please, oh pleaseeeeeeee update very soon and make a long chapter, just like this one. see ya in the next chapter!!!
person Lauand
schedule February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved this fourth chapter. The way Erestor discovered his sexuality felt so natural! And I'm glad you're following Disney's version, it's proving to be fun! I like how you depicted the three godfathers, by the way, especially Thranduil. More?
person Jayn
schedule February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Lil Esestor is growing up! Cool. Please update!!
person JastaElf
schedule February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very cute, and nicely written... I would like it a lot more if you had resisted the urge to make Thranduil into a bumbling alcoholic idiot. Oh well, at least he's a loveable bumbling alcoholic idiot... *sighs*

You have some cute turns of phrases, and the tale is enjoyable. Thank you.
person Ertia
schedule February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hee hee! This is wonderful. I love how you've drawn the contrast between the three God-Fathers. Your Thranduil makes me laugh out loud! Very very fun story!
can't wait to see what's coming up. err...so to speak...
person Jayn
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Erestor is so cute!! PLEASE Update soon!
person Ari
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awww... He's soo cute!! *Cooes at Thranduil and Erestor* Thanduil can be such a thickhead sometimes! A NAIVE thickhead! XD Omg, I'm watching FMA right now, and I can't think... so anyways, Thranduil is such a thickhead sometimes (okay, most times)! ...I can't wait until Erestor's grown!

Where's the friggen' birdy-like music, yah?

Wonderful UPDATE! Can't wait for more, and can't think too much because of FMA.

~Ari
person Ari
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
...*Stifles her laughter* I was surprised when Thranduil was the one that gave Erestor's father the idea to hide 'restor away for 500 years! My jaw dropped. I mean, wooooow. He actually THOUGHT of something clever! XD And the last part about him being too paranoid... YES! That is so true. Why would anyone get their dagger out to look for gigantic "spiders" in a seemingly-enchanted-but-harmless forest? O_o... And ohohohoho, Gil-Galad... With Elrond! *Gasp* Ooohh the kinky-ness!

"This is a mug and this is a cup..." -- HILARIOUS! Hahaha, who cares, just drink out of ONE! *Laughs out loud*

Wonderful story so far! Continue it, PLEASE!! *Begs*

~Ari