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for What Gain Was Theirs

by LonelyWhisper

schedule July 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awwwww! ::sobs::that's so sweet! ::dabs eyes with tissue:: i'm good ::sniffs:: i'm good ::cries:: D; that was amazing.....::huggles little plushies of the two close::
schedule July 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OoO

OMG&G that was amazing XS!
The first one was so...calm and nervous and I was like stuck in the emotions of both;
and the second one was just the same! I was struggling to breath with Haldir and Eomer...I felt the heaviness of the evil and suddenly peace...it was odd...o..O
I don't think a ff has ever moved me like this....I *HAVE* to see if you have any more stories...or atleast harrass you until you decided to continue writing this one XD you figure out which one XD!!

thank you for writing this XD TOTALY MADE MY NIGHT! ::faithful fan now::
schedule January 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Just wow. I dislike "wow" reviews, because they are not helpful to the writer, but when something is so profound, it's a little difficult to say anything but! It would have made a good one-shot, indeed, the ending would have been good. Poignant. But I'm glad you chose to continue. I like how you've switched back and forth from the present to the past and so on. The disjointed feeling seems to fit with how both Eomer and Haldir are feeling at the moment - it reads very well. I feel for them both. I hope you continue, and will definitely read when you do!

~KittyMeowMaxwell
person Pointless . Romantic
schedule August 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Genius!
Genius, I say!
I wish I had thought of this couple!
It's just crack enough to work!
>w<
person Teri
schedule January 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was totally outstanding. Please, please, please, you must finish this fic. It is too good to let go of.
Take Care,
Teri
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oooh you're giving me shivers! I'm liking this very much so far. Usually I'm not one for slash but I came across a good writer last year that let me believe there are good slash writers out there and I have found another! I can't wait to see what will come of Haldir and Eomer. Haldir Lives!!! :D
person Anita
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It was an awesome chapter! I relly liked how you handled their feelings an their emotions! you managed to do a really sweet and caring bond between the two of them!!! AWESOME!
person WorshipAllElves
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great job! I love your story. Please don't wait so long to update again!!
person Anita
schedule February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It is a nice piece of work! I really enjoyed it!! you are an awesome writer!
person Remetan
schedule February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Egads, but this is a beautiful story, Corvis! Good Lord! The imagery is fantastic, the struggle of these two strong men to maintain their power and honour, the dialogue you have written. Very powerful. The only thing I would recommend is looking at the places where you have capitalized the word man. I get that you did it for a reason, but the reason is unclear to me in its current formation. However, just could not stop reading!