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for The Taking of Vanelossë - Part III

by Sinkitty2

person MarzBar
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for a beautiful story. I hope they all went to Valinor and finished healing.
person MarzBar
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful chapter. I hope Vanelosse will be able to recover in spirit as well as in body. Her beautiful husband and children should help her. Thank you so much for sharing.
person MarzBar
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Legolas did have the appropriate revenge. i was relieved that Orophin got some justice, too. I hope they can go home now and resume their lives together with their children.
person MarzBar
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good torture for Larin! I hope his cronies are being treated as well as he is. I am quite willing to wait for Legolas' ultimate revenge as long as Vanelosse gets well. More story please.
person MarzBar
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
GRRRRR ARGH!! I am happy that the elves have found the captives but my lust for revenge is probably much greater than the good guys in the story. It always seems to be that way. I can hardly imagine a torture and death painful enough for Larin and his cronies.
person eggy
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I sually dont like lotr ff, but I absolutely adore this story. Your writing is so vivid and often heartbreaking. I can really picture myself there. You've done an awesome job with Larin. What a bastard- I hope he gets what he deserves!! More please!
person MarzBar
schedule December 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GRRR ARGH! Such filth and degradation committed by humans against elves for fun. I pray Vanelosse and her friends are rescued soon.
person MarzBar
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YIKES! You got right to the violence quickly in this story. This poor elleth is being so brave but has no idea what she is facing. I will wait for more story.