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for Guilt

by MiladyHawke

person Safir84
schedule January 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awesome one-shot, I really liked it! Beautifully written and well portrayed as well, the interaction was great too. Well done!

person okaydy
schedule September 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This being the second story of yours I've read, and not to be monotonous, I feel it safe to say that you're a wonderful writer with a wonderful heart and all who read here are lucky you write here.

It's that simple. Thanks, K
person JadedSoul
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is simply beautiful. It carefully evokes emotion out of the reader and it does so in such a subtle way that I find it quite outstanding. I particulary loved the last line.
person Brianneinlove
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was a great story sad and heartwreanching! I enjoyed it a great deal.
Bri