rate_review Reviews

sorry to see it end but it was great.

OMG!! This story was AWESOME! AWESOME I tell you! I was able to read this in an hour, and every chapter was better than the last. I adored the part about Lindir having not bonded because his mate was across the shore. YUM! This was way better than eating all the cookies in the world! Hopefully, If I'm not too lazy, I'll come back and re-read the entire story! XD 5 stars, 2 thumbs, etc!

I'm not quite caught up, but thought I could leave a "thank you" at least. Enjoying your story. I just read tonight somewhere else someone expressing irritation at "reviewers" saying not more than that, but in my experience writers don't really want a critique! Could I offer one suggestion? The repeated translations within the text, even to the point of mentioning that "Ai" was "Ah" isn't really necessary. You can put the translations at the end for those that don't know them. For people following your story (as well as many others'), we know stuff like "mellon nin" means "my friend" and the like. It just interrupts the flow of your writing.

Anyway, nice romantic tale.

Oh wow it just so good.More please.

That was great.Hope to see more soon.

oh wow what a story

wow, I love this! Amazing... I like the way they aren't immediately having sex... but there will be sex, won't there??

Ooooh, I can barely wait to see how it goes between those two when Baraon leaves and they're alone. *grins* I just love this story!!! *bounces*


*Mwah*
Dae

Ahhhah! *Wimper*

Want more...I love this, you know, you should make your chapters at least 10ish pages long...that would be...*Slaps self*...my bad, sorry, its just that everytime I get to the end of a chapter you post of this, I sigh "Want more, not long enough!"

*Snort*

~DarkDreamer

Aaahhh they finally realized that they are soulmates! It is about time! Now eveybody can start healing; even Lindir, does he not? We cannot forget about Lindir, can we? More please!
Hugs,
Maelle.