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by Larrkin2

person xCygnusx
schedule August 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I'm not that great with words, but I really wanted to review this after reading it last night. I think it may even have changed my life in a way.

This is a wonderfully written fic. It kept building and building, increasing in tension, but every word was worth reading without wanting to skip through to the end (like I do with most lengthy stories, admittedly). Though you kept the typical sexual content to a minimum, in my opinion it's perfect as is because, to many, spanking is a form of sex in itself.

Definitely an instant favorite story of mine. =)

~Cygnus
person schuldigLiebe
schedule February 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
o.O
that was beautifully written, and wonderful, through and through, *nods* but...
*sweat drop* if i was pipin i honestly would have been so pissed to hell with Merry. >.< which would probably only get me (pipin) into more trouble with him... but thats not the point.

you did a great job, but i felt so sorry for pip's sore bottom.