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LOL. Yeah. To all those. Esp the last one! Nothing more horrifying than the mere suggestion of that! Lol.

Is this normal for you, being this prolific? A third chapter already! Wonderful. Interesting that you have Elrond leave his room afterwards. Really brings home the point that this was an arranged...marriage. About the constant changing of POV, wouldn't it be easier to combine them both? It seems a bit...choppy.

LOL. Yeah. To all those. Esp the last one! Nothing more horrifying than the mere suggestion of that! Lol.

Is this normal for you, being this prolific? A third chapter already! Wonderful. Interesting that you have Elrond leave his room afterwards. Really brings home the point that this was an arranged...marriage. About the constant changing of POV, wouldn't it be easier to combine them both? It seems a bit...choppy.

Excellent begining. I am really enjoying this.

What a great start. You better update often and regularly -- no threat intended, of course. (bg) You have a wonderful writing style and your composition is most pleasing to read. I'll be impatiently waiting for more. Later.

Ahhh, so a 1980's interior decorator has been set loose in Legolas' room! You forgot to mention the Nagel prints and the glass-top coffee table.;P (Wonders if they had halogen track lighting in ME?)

This is looking wonderful TICS!! Quite a different approach to characterization than some of your other stories. And Arwen asked daddy to "turn him over to me." HA!! E and E didn't say as much, but i am sure they were thinking it.;)

Waiting for the next one!

So far I think you have done justice to Legolas, but it is going to be a tricky matter once they arrive at the moment of truth! I confess to a bit of confusion, though. There were allusions made to Legolas as becoming another "spouse", but it seems that there is no formal ceremony planned? So just how is Elrond going to explain all this to the rest of Imladris (who surely will take note of the bedroom visitations)? I'd hate to see Legolas not given due respect. (It's one thing to call him a catamite (or worse) in a slave fic, but this is quite a different matter.

I very much appreciated the responses of the twins to this situation - resentful of Legolas usurping (as they saw it) their mother's position, protective of their mother - yet not actively malicious towards (or plotting nefarious things against) Legolas. Good job there.

Whether it's only a few chapters -- or 10 or 20 (small nudge) -- is no difference. Your writing is a joy to read. Thanks for the quick update!

Interesting first chapter! I have added this to my list of stories to be read. Will be waiting somewhat (im)patiently for an update.
Hmm, I'm also very curious about the Twins's reaction to their father taking Legolas into his bed. Guess we'll have to wait and see.

Awww you started it! Thank you so much my friend...I cant wait for more!

~DarkDreamer

I love the premise of this story. . . It is very intersting. And I am very excited about the next chapter.