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You updated this so soon because you are an angel from Heaven that loves her readers and wants to make them happy. Yeah, angels write slash fiction, I just know it. "Thank you. Thank you for coming to me, though it was not by your choice. Always I will remember this night and its cost to you, Legolas Thranduillion." I looooved that part. I appreciate that Elrond acknowledges Legolas' part in this. He is so young, and beautiful, to give up on his own life for the sake of others. I mean, he does not go into this with the thought that he is going to find love, regardless of if he does or not. So I like Elrond's consideration of his position. Elrond didn't want to force Arwen into a loveless match, but expected Thranduil's son to do it. But maybe Elrond sees that Arwen is meant for the King of men at some time in the future. Either way, the story is working beautifully. It makes me emotional, and hot;) that's a great combination. Please add to it soon. I'm totally hooked on it.

Oh!I've been looking for more Elrond/Legolas fics to read.Thank you for writing this and more please!!!

Tics! Elrond left? He walked out and left Legolas after that? Bad Elrond - you get him back in there! Wonderful chapter, sweetie - I'm enjoying this fic tremendously.
*huggles*
Agie

Chuckling over the reviewer that asked if you were always this prolific. Answer: Yes! She puts the rest of us to shame. Our dear Tics can wip out a story in nothing flat!

Oh Tics...that was wonderful! I loved the whole POV thing...what a wonderful chapter :)

Ya know, when I threw this plot bunny at you I had no clue where you would go with it, but wow...just...wow!

~DarkDreamer

this is a real good story..... please keep it up!!!!!!!!!!

I love this pairing and never see enough of it. Your writing and character sketches are wonderful. I feel so sorry for Legolas, but I don't feel angry towards Elrond. I like that Elladan, in his turmoil, spelled out what for me lies at the heart of the angst; the fact that Legolas is being forced to sacrafice his youth and heart for his people. At least Elrond has known true love, and will know it again once he crosses the Sea. Legolas is not given that chance, and I think it only fair that everyone acknowledge his position...poor baby. Of course, I'm hoping Elrond falls madly in love with Legolas, and vice versa;) But still, how is he to know that will happen, and isn't it sad he'll always have to share with Elrond's first love? O.K., I'm a little caught up obviously, lol. Please add more soon! Thank you bunches!

LOL. I disagree! I’ve come across many stories with promising plot, but because it was so poor in grammar, it distracted me from the story itself. It can create confusion, as well. It dismays me at times. Though sometimes, it may be because it was coupled with a lack of thought put into the story. Know you, those stale, 2-D ones? I like a rather thorough insight into what is going on in the characters' mind, why they do what they do. That for me makes the story more believable and the characters real. Few people I think have the talent to create a substantial story with mostly just dialogue and little description for anything else. It doesn’t have to be rich in imagery, just get the human aspect right.
Anyways, I like that the children have misgivings about this union. I think it’s the most natural reaction for them in this case, to feel that their mother’s place is being usurped and, through loyalty to her, be vocal about their feelings.

So, Arwen and the twins aren't really happy with their father's decision and Arwen even proposed to marry Legolas. Although Elrond refused and we all know why, don't we? Still, he could have asked one of the twins to bind with Legolas, that would have linked the two realms together as well.

What?! Elrond is going to bed Legolas on his first night already? Poor Legolas, seems he doesn't get much of a respite. What's wrong with a little courting, love-ballads sung underneath the balcony, evening strolls in the moonlight,getting to know each other first, ... Oh well, I guess it's still better than what Legolas imagined himself :
*Legolas had feared that the warrior Lord might expect his due immediately upon the Prince's arrival in the city, perhaps even taking him on the stone steps in full view of Legolas' Mirkwood escort.* Now that would have been a sight to see.

Oh, so tender -- so HOT!! I have to go now, someone is waiting!! (bg)