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for The Boon

by TICS

person DurOltha
schedule November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love how you have made Legolas invaulved with Aragorns raising, it would make sence as to why he trust Legolas so unconditionaly during the quest...

Wonderful update...

~DarkDreamer
person Steph
schedule November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor Estel. I love how you've worked his and Arwen's story into this. I'm a slash girl all the way, but with Legolas as such a part of Estel's life, I love to see how Estel's life struggles effect him as well. I also really enjoyed the way Legolas offers solace and advice to Elrond. He's such an important part of that house now. This has gone in so many interesting directions, while all the while keeping Elrond and Legolas at its center. Just fabulous! Thank you luv!
person Tiryaroofshadow
schedule November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Double cheers for the twins! Hurrah! for finally welcoming Legolas into their hearts and Hurrah! for bringing the two lovebirds together. Otherwise who knows how long those two would have waited, with Elrond not wanting to force himself upon Legolas and Legolas waiting for some cue from his husband that this one longs for his touch. Silly lovefools, both of them.
And so, after nearly two months, Legolas is finally where he should have been from the start. Moving into his husband's bedroom, aka the 'master'-bedroom, or the nuptial suite. *wonders whether there will still be some kind of 'bonding celebration' now that it is clear to everyone that they love each other. - imagines little Estel running down the aisle with the bonding rings.
person nikkiling
schedule November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Gods! That was beautiful! This whole story is beautiful, but that last chapter was HOT! I love it when Legolas takes control!
I'm glad the twins are finally accepting the situation. And I loved the surly Erestor in the previous chapter.
I didn't review before 'cause I didn't know what else to say but that I really love the story, but what the hell. I really love this story!
person Daeomae
schedule November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*blissful sigh* The twins finally apologized, and Elrond and Legolas finally quit "dancing" around each other. Perfect! And I think you're so very right that Elrond is going to be quite unenthusiastically surprised when Estel is old enough to notice Arwen as more than a mother-type figure. Eeep! Bring on the next one, hehehe. *wink*

*Mwah*
Dae
person Steph
schedule November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YES! Forceful Legolas makes my toes curl, and I'm doubley pleased with the sweet kisses and loving words that followed. This was a feel good chapter all around, with the twins approaching Legolas as they did, and Estel falling into a more contented routine with Arwen and Legolas. I love the image of Legolas making him a baby bow...so endearing. Ch. 6 really made me smile. It also made me horny...but you probably don't want to know that, lol. I'm going to have sweet dreams tonight of Elrond and his feisty-sweet young husband. Thats a great combination isn't it?

You've been very generous with your posts. I wish all authors were as kind. I know it is difficult to be prompt when writing a story, and I'm just happy your muses are really working with you on this. Take care.
person DurOltha
schedule November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooo...Estel....interesting addition...more please :)

~DarkDreamer
person midnighteyes
schedule November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Really like this story... Getting better and better .... Please keep it up!!!!!!!!!!!!
person DurOltha
schedule November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YES!!!

*Wriggles fingers in your direction*

You will sucome to the "non-drabble-length-writing-curse" that I have been inflicted with for sooo long! *Wriggly fingers* "Oooo...boogga Boogga!"

I love that the story has taken on a life of its own, I was hopeing it would! Becouse I love your writeing!

~DarkDreamer
person Daphne
schedule November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A wonderful two chapters (4 and 5). I was out of town for a few days, and it was a very nice treat to come home and find them posted. You are truly wonderous! I was wondering if Aragorn was going to come into the picture, and you answered that question rather nicely. Thanks for sharing your talent with us all.