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for Lord Erestor's Surprising Day

by AmberKelly

person DarkDreamer
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
There was no (TBC...) but Im asuming that there will be more by the way you finished the chap...I must say Im enjoying this...expechaly this part..........

((His hair was covering his face but it was quite clear that it was him; naked. He did not seem to be injured, although he was quite naked. But the most important fact that hit Melpomaen was that Erestor was naked. Without clothes on. Nude.))

*Snort* Niiiice....very niiiice... *Snort*

~DarkDreamer
person Tenar10r
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cute story, but please run this through a spell-checker and grammar-checker.
This tale is going to be really amusing and I am looking forward to the next chapter.