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Mealle, I love it - it is so funny! tx for making me laugh! *hugs* binky x

Oh, I loved the naughty spanking, hehehe! Off to read the next story *smiles*

*hugs*
Jana

I am about half way through the first chapter of this story, I really love elves being clumsy, lol. But I havent had the chance to read more with so much stuff to do for university! About the "Elfiction" I guess it can have potential but elves can writeas many stories about themselves as we have written about them, so it would be "the never ending fic" lol. And thank you for the genius part *blushes*

I have two more pieces with Lindir ready to post, I just need to figure out if I will write prequels to them or not and in one (or perhaps all...ina way) he is paired with Erestor, so i think you'll like that, keep an eye out.

Btw there is a link to my table of those 100 fics I have to write http://www.livejournal.com/userinfo.bml?user=laur_melyanna . I only have one so far. Scroll down and you'll see it. Check out the prompts if any of them rise a bunny for you that you'd like to see written (if its not TOO long lol) send it to me and i'll write for you ^^

Hugs, laur.

That was hot! Your english is fucking good for "rusty" category. I am not a native speaker of English either, I'm Brazillian, so I speak portuguese, but I totally love English and I know all about making typing and grammar mistakes all over the place lol its my specialty, no one can take that from me! hehe.

So, that was very hot and with a very sweet ending! Now onto reading the sequel!!!

Hugs,
Laur.
PS.: I wrote that other FB just half an hour ago hm..i read fast when with free time and interesting material eh?

*Wibble*

End for now? Noooooooo!

Very niiiiice spanking btw :)~

~DarkDreamer

I loved this line.....
((It was almost like he was making a map in is head, taking notice of taste and texture.))

And the whole "Bad Elf" thing was just to gooood!!! *Snort*


Thank you for saying you like my stuff, that is realy nice to hear. And thanks for putting me in your recomended reading *Blushes*

~DarkDreamer

Thank you for another delightful chapter!
You say that English is not your first language? Other than a couple of odd phrasings (as though English had internal consistancy) I would have
never guessed. Your grasp of English far exceeds my fluency in any of the languages in which I have dabbled. Another chapter pretty please?

Hey there, nice PWP. The only thing that bothered me was that Mel gave Erestor a blowjob in the bathtub without having to dive in the water? Where did all the water go? My advice: keep track of things like that when you write. You are talented and your stories will get even better if you take better care of little things like that - never forget that even sexy stories need logic, continuity etc. to be real good ;) I'm looking forward to more from Erestor and Mel (and that says something because for me Erestor and Glorfindel belong together! *gg*)

Very sweet story - I love Mel saying he'd been a bad elf. *snort*

You´re cruel to stop now ;) please continue!!