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October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi! Interesting plot, and incredibly well written! I love the confrontation of "Truebow" with the Noldor guard who insulted him (Vile son of kinslayers!, and I love Glorfindels reaction, too. But why did you choose five hundred as the time of 'coming of Age'? Anyway. I hope you wil continue this tale, for it starts greatly.Just one question: is the messenger indeed Legolas with another name to guard his identity, or is he meant to be a different Elf? I hope it is Legolas, though; he *acts*as aprince would, too. Please continue soon!
Aislynn
Aislynn
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October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Looks like the beginnings of a really good story! I just have one question: Is Legolas a prince and the Imladris elves just don't know it yet, or is he just a messenger?
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October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting plot you choose. Also very well-written.
I really liked it and I hope you'll update soon.
I really liked it and I hope you'll update soon.
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October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! Just plain, Awesome! Your writing, characterization, plotline and the languange are just incredibly pulled together. Please continue and soon.
Take Care,
Teri
Take Care,
Teri