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for The White City: Guardians of Gondor

by faelbain

person HHS
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm worried that Haleigh will still betray even if they manage to save his son.
person HHS
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm worried that Haleigh will still betray even if they manage to save his son.
person HHS
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Now at least Legolas knows the truth about Haleigh's treachery.Though the reason might be understandable,I just hope the he realizes that the consequences might not be good at the end.
person kitty
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
what a lovely chapter, especially Aragorns little revelation about his feelings regarding Legolas.

Hadt to laugh at Legolas's reaction to Aragorn believing that Elrohir actually hits Legolas. As if Legolas would allow that!
person Holly
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
...I'm really enjoying your story - and wish I could be more eloquent in my compliments toward you... Certainly felt the hate for Haleigh - and when I first read the name, I found it somewhat similar to 'Holly' and was slightly perturbed... Anyway, yay for elf-angst! A requirement for any outstanding tale. :)
person HHS
schedule January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yikes!No wonder Legolas was hella-pissed!Damn it Elrohir!TELL HIM OR ARAGORN!!!
person Jasta
schedule January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Why do I have the most awful feeling that when Aragorn goes looking for Legolas, something BAD will have happened to Our Prince at the hands of the evil H Lord?? :-( The poor baby.... And of course Legolas will feel guilty afterwards for making Elrohir tired... when Elrohir has been a sodding GIT.... GAH! Poor Legolas... I'm loving the angst though. *g* Thanks for your neat story!
person Annariel
schedule January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ohh Elrohir is unfair with Legolas, he don't try him as a equal. Poor Leggy, If I would be him, I search other elf for a time, to have Elrohir react at last. ;P
Great chapter :)
person HHS
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I say that he should have beaten the crap out of that bastard.
person HHS
schedule December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
How about them trusting the people of Gondor about their marriage?That traitor must be dealt with and soon before he causes anymore damage if not serious.