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December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sorry for butting in but I do have one big bone to pick with concerning this story.
Why is is categorized in the male/male section of this archive? While I do understand this story has some male/male action but still it is mainly a hetero story in reality, and the little side dish of slash does not change the fact.
Even the male/male action involved the oc/mary-sue at points. So I as a slash reader don't appreaciate it when I am lied to and find hetero stories in a category that has the title of male/male on it.
When I visit the male/male section I expect to find fics that involve two male characters in a sexual relationship and not any females in sight (or very little of them and not as the focal point). Same goes if I go to female/female sections I don't want to see any males in the sex scences then, and in het section I don't expect to find slash exept if it is a threesome (like in this case) fic with f/f/m or m/m/f but still the story would in that case be still a hetero story.
That would be all from me. I admit I did not finish the story after I started but that was because I realised this story was not a slash story that I expected to find in the slash category and het stories just don't do it for me.
As a writer I wish you well and that you continue writing since there are people who like het, I am just not one of them.
So Please change this story from the male/male section in to under the male/female category where it belongs and I will have no complaints because then my expectations won't be cheatewd like they were this stime. The categories are there for a reason so that everyone could find what appeals to them the most.
annakas
Why is is categorized in the male/male section of this archive? While I do understand this story has some male/male action but still it is mainly a hetero story in reality, and the little side dish of slash does not change the fact.
Even the male/male action involved the oc/mary-sue at points. So I as a slash reader don't appreaciate it when I am lied to and find hetero stories in a category that has the title of male/male on it.
When I visit the male/male section I expect to find fics that involve two male characters in a sexual relationship and not any females in sight (or very little of them and not as the focal point). Same goes if I go to female/female sections I don't want to see any males in the sex scences then, and in het section I don't expect to find slash exept if it is a threesome (like in this case) fic with f/f/m or m/m/f but still the story would in that case be still a hetero story.
That would be all from me. I admit I did not finish the story after I started but that was because I realised this story was not a slash story that I expected to find in the slash category and het stories just don't do it for me.
As a writer I wish you well and that you continue writing since there are people who like het, I am just not one of them.
So Please change this story from the male/male section in to under the male/female category where it belongs and I will have no complaints because then my expectations won't be cheatewd like they were this stime. The categories are there for a reason so that everyone could find what appeals to them the most.
annakas
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January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was a wonderfully written story! I love how you never said 'Middle Earth' and called it Arda and also that you i did a very different pairing and plot compared to most other stories. No sending her off to fight the war, no marrying Legolas lol Good job! The language was done nicely and the whol Glorfindel getting to Earth was done in a very cool way.
This story was amazing and you should be very proud of yourself and your amazing talent.
Amazing piece of work!
Earwen
p.s i also love the fact that she's Canadian like me. Long live the Kanucks! lol
This story was amazing and you should be very proud of yourself and your amazing talent.
Amazing piece of work!
Earwen
p.s i also love the fact that she's Canadian like me. Long live the Kanucks! lol
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January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh god thats too funny! (holds stomach as she laughs insanely) *deep breath* AHHH!!HAHAH! oh god! *wipes away tears* ah that was good! i love this story so much!
Earwen
Earwen
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January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, that was an ending I was not expecting! It made a brilliant read! I find it hard to imagine a greying elf! - I know he was more 'humanitised' when Eru sent him to earth, buit somehow all I had in my mind was an attractive elf,now an old attractive elf!? A fantastic story, I enjoyed reading it!
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December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter, I have probably said it already, but this is a great read. Her family kind of sounds like mine!! I like the way 'Finn' has fitted into society so well. Look forward to reading more...
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December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Mary Sue from hell..
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December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another fantastic chapter, I thoroughly enjoyed reading this and found his explanation of how he fitted into life on 'earth'. Wonderful! I really enjoyed reading this, and look forward to reading more! This really is a brilliant story! I look forward to the next update! Till then bye!
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November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just finished reading this, and had intended to review each chapter, but got so engrossed in reading this, i completely forgot. It was as if i was seeing the whole story play out in front of me, as if I was watching the TV. What can i say except Wow! It is a fantastic story! I thoroughly enjoyed it! It had a mixture of everything in it, and I just loved the way you re-introduced 'Finn' into Karyn's world. Absolutely brilliant! You have a real talent for writing!
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November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your story keeps getting better and better everytime I read it. I want you to know that you are doing a great job and don't let anyone on here discourage you from continuing this story. I was very sad to see it gone from scribeoz, and I found it on another site as well as this one. I look forward to many updates and I hope you write more stories as well!!!
Keep up the excellent work!!!
P.S. Your next story can be about me, Elrohir, and Elladan. You don't have to say much, just say Chapter 1....Cecilia and the twins had hours and hours of great sex...the end....hehehe!!!!
Keep up the excellent work!!!
P.S. Your next story can be about me, Elrohir, and Elladan. You don't have to say much, just say Chapter 1....Cecilia and the twins had hours and hours of great sex...the end....hehehe!!!!
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October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I didn't know you had this story on this site. I've been reading it on FF.net, though I haven't read the latest two or three chapters. I apologize for not reviewing enough, but school has been brutal this semester. I have greatly enjoyed reading your story! It takes me into a whole other world, and I admit it's my escape from reality. While I was reading your story it reminded me of a song that I absolutely love. It's called "When you kiss me" by Shania Twain. I believe that it embodies Karyn and Glorfindel. I hope to catch up on what's going on this weekend. I was happy with the last chapter I read. Their wedding ceremony in Lorien was beautiful. That's when I thought of the song. Keep up the excellent work, and update soon!!!