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for The Doomsman

by Serenityabrin

person zena72
schedule October 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Find it strange that you write Elrond and Celebrian like they're still married. Elrond calling her 'my love' in front of hus husband was a little startling, and I find it strange that they still refer to each other as husband and wife when they're no longer together. I don't understand why LOTR authors always do this. It's just confusing...
person Jenn
schedule May 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yeah! Thank you for posting the rest of the chapters. I loved the fic. Amusing how Celebrian tries to test Namo. I feel sorry for poor Vaire at the end. All alone, but hopeful so not too bad.
person Sharon
schedule February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, an update!!! Poor Celebrian... I think she needs a lover too. How about Glorfindel, he'd just standing around after all. It might help keep her occupied and save Elladan/Namo from the wedding to end all weddings! LOL

Can't wait for more!

Sharon
person annakas
schedule January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
love the fic. Simply love it. Awww poor Namo so confused. It was hilarious how he just blurted the marriage out *snicker* Awww and poor Elladan was dumped after their first night. Atleast Namo is starting to understand. Can't wait for more.
person Hannah
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is great :) I'm so happy you updated, I've been waiting for another chapter :D Love it so far, keep up the excellent work!! Hope you have another chapter on the way soon, I'm excited!! Happy New Year!
person Caethien
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for another great chapter! For being well over three thousand Elladan and Elrohir seem so young sometimes! But it fits them. I look forward to some more Orome/Elrond scenes: they're my favorites.
person Sherry
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story. Can't wait for an update!

sherry
person Caethien
schedule November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank you, Serenity, for another excellent (well, short but sweet) chapter of the Doomsman. I do not think I have reviewed either the Doomsman or the Hunter yet, but I love them both. Though I am a stauch Elrond/Gil-galad fan, Elrond/Orome is very refreshing, and I do wish there were more Elf/Ainu pairings (I've been think ing Elrond/Eonwe would be interesting as both are Heralds to High Kings). Maybe I'll just have to write another myself. I love your characterization of Orome, too. He's so selfless and strong, but he's somehow very well-rounded very..um.."human"... at the same time. I particually liked the massage scene in chapter four. Orome loves Elrond so much that he wants only Elrond's pleasure and happiness and needs, and does not pay any attention to his own desires.

I'm also enjoying Namo's developing relationship with Elladan. I like your characterization of Namo too: the way he has to learn about Elvish customs from Orome, very clever. With the last chapter, though, I am very curious to see what Elrond is up to with Erestor in the garden, and what he was doing locked in a room with Galdor for nine hours!

Thank you for your timely updates, by the way.

Peace,
Caethien
person elley
schedule November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was a great chapter. I like Namo's characterization and the way he's confused. He's like a fish out of water.
person Sharon
schedule October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I had to read this chapter a second time! I love the story, as you know. More soon PLEASE!
Sharon