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by TICS

person Jayn
schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
How cute!! Rumil was terrible Naive. Lol. ^_^
person Anon
schedule September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hilarious! Well-written, a pleasure to read.
In fact, the best short piece I've read in too long a while.
Thank You.
Any chance of second helpings aka further Rumil Adventures? He obviously still has a lot to learn!

*scurries off to see what else you may have written*
person kalima
schedule September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Funny. Silly. Well done.
person DurOltha
schedule September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*LAUGHES, THEN BEGINS TO COUGH SO HARD I PIDDLE MYSELF!*
(((shared with him the fact that drinking wine while eating
lembas could make one's stomach explode)))

(((He thought that perhaps he should amend that sign to read, "New
Adult. Don't Mind the Hair, and Would You Like To Copulate With Me?")))

Excellent! I loved this!!!

~DarkDreamer