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Nope the boy is not too bright...put manipulative, scheming, ambitious, elleth with a penchant for information gathering and trading that info for her benefit into court service where she'll have the uh...ear...of not just one but of any lord or lady in want of an enticing sex partner??? yeah ooookay...dumba**!! So all-knowing one, we may see more of the faithless wench after all huh? oh joy! But you did remove her from the immediate proceedings so I suppose it is only fair and honourable that we release the fridge--for now!! :P

I loved this chapter, the length was great thank you! Though I'm battling with that sick, fluttery stomach feeling--you know the one you get just before the axe murderer shows up on screen and hacks the partially nude heroine to death...oi! How many days 'til the maturation ceremony??? You played with lots of ideas in this one. It's great that Silindrical throws out the kind of description of Fin that we're-uh...i'm-hoping to see--'brave, truthful, sincere and handsome beyond compare' notice she didn't say smart! heh heh. so far he's been sincere and truthful only about expressing his appetites and brave?? hmmm...that's arguable. At once, I want to applaud her observation, pleased with his development, and fight the chill of dread that reminds me the observations were made by a liar who hopes to use honeyed words to solidify her social position. So is it a "true" statement of how Fin is progressing? Maybe maybe not---after all didn't she use a smiliar line on Erestor who she obviously does not think brave or handsome (stooopid cow!! grrrr!!!!! is it too late to put her to death?)

I also liked the "hey buddy I'm just looking out for you" spin Fin tries to throw on at the end of this chapter...ah yes, remind our dearest counsellor-to-be that *she* was using him....heh...and what his plans are just so very altruistic and based in a growing sense of love and devotion??? yeah right! Poor Erestor is so primed now--he's emotionally wide open--his option of marital protection is gone--even if he'd been able to overlook Silindrical's betrayal the ink was dry already, he's hurting and reeling with the way his whole perspective of fidelity has been upended and Fin is just so slick to be stepping in with his oh-so supportive self. He's still not worthy--hrmph (but uh...he might just be getting there...)

Oh and having her voice that it is Erestor who is one who's dishonest and plying false hope was brilliantly done as not only is she a commoner seeking advancement in a way that is socially acceptable (being Fin's or any Lord's whore is of course okay, but the idea that she'd actually bond with a noble is funny--stoopid cow), but it reminds us that it's more than just the nobility eyeing Erestor's professional success with uncommon interest. Ahhhhhhhh...the plot thickens--and dammit we have to wait 'til next week for more...waaaahh!!!! *note the boo-boo lip*

Ummm, oh yeah....so....it was HUGE huh? Did they have the glow-in-the-dark, purple nubby one too? That one is uh...highly recommended :D!!!!

Btw--I just have to say for the first time ever...I actually like Mondays now :D hmm...wonder why that is--hee hee. Though I wouldn't be adverse to liking Wednesdays in addition...hint hint :D

Oh-ho! That was a wonderful update! Glorfindel was so...so...Ooo...and I knew I didnt like her for some reason...and Erestor being all stiff and mono at the end...Excellent! Eagerly awaiting more!

~DarkDreamer

*Whistles innocently* Fine, fineeee... Glorfindel has never been good at this "wooing" thing before. I mean, lookit him! He's harassing poor 'restor! T__T... Oh well. Glorfindel has never been the brightest nut in the tree, anyways. That really was a short chapter, but it made sense... Looks like Glorfindel is looking this up, yah? *Waggles eyebrows and nudges you* "Male/male bonking books, if you please" =3 That's Glorfindel for yah, blunt and to the point, never embarassed at his actions at all.

o_o... Though I am sorta shifty about how Glorfindel got all that information about 'restor...

~Ari

YES, UPDATE, YEEEESSS!

I like the chapter (well it's obvious by now that I like when Erestor and Glorfindel are together, but that's beside the point), but it was too short, I hope for a longer one, with lots of Glorfindel (the elf knows how to make Erestor nervous! ) and Erestor and no elleths around, that would be so wonderful. (I have nothing against elleths, I mean I'm one, but I really don't like them around them) Anyway I can do nothing else but hope you could post another chapter sooner.

**Always** worth the wait! I love the sexy bad boy of this chapter, eh he's still a prick but at least Erestor isn't overly molested plus steamy library scenes are always a good thing in my book. Of course...it -was- too damn short *sigh* s'okay you will make it up to us right? *bats eyelashes* cause you know it's hard to enjoy cookies without milk, your fans may have to take the fridge hostage....hmm...

And yeah, he's hard to resist I know...In Fin's place I'd probably be an obsessive stalker psycho too faced with yummy Erestorness. Then again I know where Erestor is coming from as I had this same sort of problem in a library once-course my uh ??suitor?? wasn't a devilishly handsome elf, if he had been well things probably would've ended differently. As it is Erestor would probably be beheaded if he clobbered Glorfindel over the head with a chair but I have to say the sense of vindication is highly rewarding--lovely snapping sounds, straining and splintering wood, groaning boy on the floor... Eh-maybe he'll get his chance at straining wood and groaning boy on the floor-heh heh-soon, who knows? Oh yeah I forgot *you* do :p! Well all-knowing one thanks for a great chapter. I liked it lots and lots (even if it was a bit short *pouts*). Ummm...and uh...thanks for sharing about the nipple vibrators I guess??? eh and people say slash serves no purpose, didn't we all just learn something rather...um...interesting. hee hee!

Onward to next week (and more story!!) YAY!!! :D cause everyone has a price hmm....stupid elleth and stupid elleth's daddy--hrmph--add my vote to the 'we don't like her' tally love the story though ;D

There will be a happy ending wont there? I really like all the naughty Glorfindel bits, but one day he has to fall in love with Erestor and regret being mean (even though I really like him mean...sexy elf). Please write more chapters and speed up if you can I love this story.

When Erestor mentioned the black magic books I was thinking "Hey, maybe he can try some of that stuff out on Glorfindel..." but how sweet and innocent could Erestor stay if he did that? No, no, I guess Erestor will just have to be continually molested... I think I understand why Glorfindel is such a bastard - I mean, how would you feel if you were horny 24/7 and the honey you wanted hated your guts? Psh, yeah, I'd be pretty bitchy, too XD
Oh and -blinks- is your mum really your beta? o.o Your mum is a slash-fan? ...that would be, like, cool and creepy at the same time XD
Anyway! Looking forward to your next post and more Erestor-molestation! ^_^
Love the tipsy elveses! ;D

Well, well, well, someone is jealous, how nice! However Glorfindel should stop kissing elleths, when there are cute elves like Erestor around. I really like the interaction between Erestor and Glorfindel and I hope to see more in the next chapter. By the way, I still don't like her.

this a wonderful story, please update very soon because i am waiting and write longer chapters, why???
because these are too short and make some action in them , they are too oring. well see you in tha next chapter, bye!!!

....o_o!! I didn't think of that! YES! Make Silindrical and Erestor break up early! MWUAHAHAH! *Cackles evilly and turns to her accomplice Glorfindel* Psst, psst... I forgive you for forcing Erestor, but the next time you do, make it somewhat romantic, hehe. And if you don't- *Glares and bares teeth* I'll smash them. Yes, I WILL. ^^

~Have a great day, because I just did (you finally updated, yipppeeee!!!),
Ari