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for Through The Ages

by Mawgy

person Arien
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your story;
It's verrry well written and beleiveable.
I feel sorry for poor erstor though to have gone through all that at school and still end up getting hurt by glorfindel.
Oh well me person i woould have smack regraudly of the punshment.
We can all hope he learned more manners in the hall of waiting before he got turn loose in rivendel and on Esteror again.
Love the story and i can wait to read the nexted part
thank you for writting it
person Lyon's Own
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
If it'll get you to post faster then foot rubs and calf massages abound! Oh the teasing!!! Footrubs yes but we're revoking the fridge!
person Eredhien
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry about the reviews, but hopefully everything will be alright now. I supose I don't need to say that I'm waiting for the next chapter to be posted, because I'm dying to know what's gonna happen between Erestor and Glorfindel and I really want to read about that first encounter. I'm anxious...
person Suzie
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like this story so much. Poor Erestor though..he must be so scared. I liked the way that Glorfindel let Erestor wipe off his tears before facing the crowd. I just hope that he isn't too mean. I mean..uurrrrr...I just want him to really care about Erestor. It's going to be so sad for Erestor when he goes to Glorfindel's room. But I can't wait for the next chaper.
person zenah
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hello, sorry about your feet. i hope that you are feeling better, i got mad at you because it was such a short chapter, like i told you longer chapters......please i wait a whole week for these and when it comes, i read it in a less of a minuete, well bye and good luck.please update soon :)
person Crispin
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn , That was an awful tease !! Had me going there for a minute. Here I am thinking , Oh boy this is it ! And bam TBC . I'll be chomping at the bit till Thursday.
person Ari
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O_O... I sense some pervi-ness in Glorfindel... Then again, he's always been a horny man! >_<; And my, my... Erestor! You're such a push-over! *Giggles madly before slapping self* Eeep! It must be the whole syrup bottle I drank again, dammit!! Oh, and don't ask. I just love being sugar high all the time... Makes everyone think I'm crazy, mwuahahahah. You should see the looks on their faces, priceless-- uh, well, nevermind about that. *Cough* Anyways, you've been giving *really* short chapters, ne? Muse gone down? 'Cause my muse has been shot down by my own sibling. *Whines* Now he won't come back until he gets a new leg! And that's saying a lot 'cause he has to pay for one... x_x...

In this chapter, Glorfindel seems as if he needs a good romp, maybe he should get Etchelion or however you spell his name. >_<; Oh! Whatever happened to those two, anyways? They seemed like good friends in the beginning? Or are they too busy nowadays, eh?

~Lovely chapter as always
Ari
person DurOltha
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooo...short sweet and to the point...plus its a tease chap! You naughty naughty author! (Hug)
And yes, I cut and paste my reviews when someone posts their stuff multiple places, I do this becouse of whipes and glitches and that way you know exatly what what said. And I say...more soon my friend! *Snort* Oh, and btw, I sent my dog out and he found your feet, as soon as we get them superglued back on, I would be more then happy to rub them for you! :)
~DarkDreamer
person Eredhien
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A prize, yes, of course you deserve a wonderful prize for this chapter. This chapter was full of deception, I mean everybody has been using the others, of course that... woman was the worst, but now I wonder how is Erestor gonna take this change, because he's now reaching his majority and he has stopped acting afraid around Glorfindel, beside his heart has been broken and that surely will make him different, the question is how different. Dear Glorfindel, he was Erestor knight, he rescued him from a horrible fate with that woman, but his metods are always so dramatic; anyway I love the milk episode, how wonderful idea, pour milk, make him unconscious and then carry him to bed... very lovely.
person zenah
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow, this story is amazing. please, pleaseeee update soon. i´m waiting pactiently and i hope that you will update very soon and i promise that i will review as soon as you update, poor erestor, my heart is suffering for him and glorfindel is making me so angry, i hope that they will be together very soon and do not make me wait so much, please?
that girl i hope that she dies, she´s such a slut, fucking whore. i hope she dies, fuuuuck heeer!!!!!!!
bye, see ya in the next story.