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Oooh please update soon; don't know what to make of Glorfindel not wanting Erestor prepared...is it that he wants to do it himself or doesn't plan to do so at all?

Fabulous story. Fabulous chapter. I just love poor little suffering Erestor. The more angst he suffers, the hotter he is. Just one thing. I forgot to review the chapter this part was in, but you had written that Erestor was knocked out by a fall (initiated by Glorfi?) and was carried to bed by Glorfindel, undressed and tucked in by the golden lord-to-be. I just wanted to ask: could we not get a vivid description of that encounter? Especially the undressing part and Glordindel's reaction to seeing the unconscious, naked Erestor? Pretty please????

Wa~aaaahhh!! *Sobs* I'm being picked on-- Just kidding. Yah, I suppose you are right when it is pretty obvious he's a pervert... Ehhhhhh... o_O; Well, I didn't know Erestor would be so prepared for our dearest I-want-my-hands-down-your-pert-backside Glorfindel. I was thinking, "Why shouldn't Glorfy just be happy that Erestor prepared himself, hmm?" Then suddenly, I realized that he wanted to break Erestor, yah? Make him scared, and make 'em screeeeeeeeam... Oh well, I might be wrong though.

Awesome chapter! And I can't wait for the next!
~Ari

P.S. Glorfy's a horny butttttt! *Snickers behind hand*

NO NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO you can't do this to me "taking a little while off to get these into shape" is not in order, OBJECTION OBJECTION.....you are a cruel malicious person an I hate you! noooooooooooooo....................... *sobs*

Arghhh! I´m really going to kill Glorfindel. Normally I like him but this time he´s such a brat!, I want to throttle him!!!!
I hope you make him suffer somehow! Poor Erestor....please continue asap!!!

Ooohooo...Findels not happy that he prepared himself ay? Niiiiice. Bad! Bad Findel! Im loveing this so much, I was just chompin on the bit for Thrusday to come! And then you tease me again! I love the way you write!! (Hugs)
~DarkDreamer

Happy Birthday to me! I'm 18 today and you've made my day fantastic. Ooh, it's so cute that Erestor prepared himself. Err, I hope that Glorfindel meant that he hadn't wanted Erestor to do it so that he could do it himself, not that he wouldn't do it at all...ouch, but I think I was right on the first one, gopefully. Glorfindel is such a sexy beastly elf, and yeah, it does make me a bit hot inside. It's so hot the way he has complete control over Erestor and there is nothing he can do about it..except take it. And maybe beg. hehe.

Ok, I read this very short chapter and although I like it, it was too short, did I mention how short it was? I'm truly glad things are getting somewhere, but poor Erestor, he's gonna be suffering for a long time with Glorfindel and his devious ways. And Glorfindel was being very demanding, I mean send Erestor away just because he was prepared, ¡unbelievable!

Thank you so much for guiding me to this story after I loved "Yearning". Again, this is a fabulously entertaining fic with great characterizations. You make the people so real I feel I could reach out and touch them. (I also wouldn't mind if Glorfindel came to my room and pounded me up the arse either. Could you arrange to send him over??) But I just want to take poor shivering little Erestor to bed with me and cuddle him up some. Anyway, this story is very hot and can only get hotter as it progresses. Nice contrast between the overwhelmingly masculine Glorfindel and the haughty but vulnerable little scribe Erestor. Another thing I love about this story besides the angst and the sexual tension is the political stuff. I am so into all that Lord and Peasant stuff that it makes the story all the more intriguing for me! I am so hoping that Glorfindel will take up the cause in the future and join in the revolution! Wait - sorry - that's me getting carried away. Like your mother, I am an old hippie who still bangs "Woodstock" into the DVD player every August and cries her eyes out for what was lost.

This story is a fascinating look at bullying which is sadly a truth that we must deal with even today. I love the way that you combine cruelty with tenderness and you really don't hold back on showing how horrible young boys can be to each other. I have to admit that I sneaked a look ahead to the NC-17 chapter and was blown away with how you handled that. Wow. It was such a refreshing take on Glorfindel as well. We are so used to seeing him as a blond-haired love God. Not that I don't mind reading about him that way, but your Glorfindel is not only hott but baad as well. Hotly cruel. Very compelling story, Mawgy!